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MY 1st wall paper was unacepted
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OK i may have posted this topic a few hours ago but i double eposted and the post with the data was deleted by the website so now im reposting again. NOW to get to the main topic of disscussion. The first wallpaper that I submitted here in AP was not accepted by the moderator. Well i thought that i did a pretty good job but i guess that it is not good enough so i wanted some feedback from other people besides the moderator. ANY COMMENTS will do, even if they might be rude i dont mind as long as i get real opinions that will help me to become better.
2 years 3 months ago
Hum...ok here is my comments:
1/u use an image of a real sky right? It's not acceptable here in AP. you must use effect and brush to draw.
2/The idea of changing the colour of Saber then rotate isn't work -_-. must think of another way
3/never write too much for the wallpaper's title. -_-
thats wat I think. ^^ but the wall looks fine to me though
1/u use an image of a real sky right? It's not acceptable here in AP. you must use effect and brush to draw.
2/The idea of changing the colour of Saber then rotate isn't work -_-. must think of another way
3/never write too much for the wallpaper's title. -_-
thats wat I think. ^^ but the wall looks fine to me though
Hmmm...in my opinion...
I think your scan quality is low and it's a lil bit noisy
especially the background...you better work on that...
then I think you should removed the red in girl there and find another text...
hope this help you..
I think your scan quality is low and it's a lil bit noisy
especially the background...you better work on that...
then I think you should removed the red in girl there and find another text...
hope this help you..
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Wow looks great , i think the reason for being rejected is the bg at the bottm is grainy..the sky
also i dont like the image you turned sideway of saber at the bottom in red. i think it dosent fit with the blue theme you have chosen which looks great. perhaps another image of saber instead of the red one..a close up of her face maybe. one more thing the image of saber at the sky on the right, her face is a bit unclean
its looking great
good luck
also i dont like the image you turned sideway of saber at the bottom in red. i think it dosent fit with the blue theme you have chosen which looks great. perhaps another image of saber instead of the red one..a close up of her face maybe. one more thing the image of saber at the sky on the right, her face is a bit unclean
its looking great
good luck
Man, i won't talk about other already said, but your font is SO LAME it's like a big scar on this wall. why do people always pass on the font? Font is as much important as the rest of a wall, you have to work hours on it to blend it, find the right place for it, the right size, not just SLAP it rudely as you did it's UGLY.
I suggest you take the real title image of FSN, and for your sentence, Optimus Princeps with a few effects.
I suggest you take the real title image of FSN, and for your sentence, Optimus Princeps with a few effects.
EVENTUALLY... THE SAME XD
That's right, you cannot use something directly (expect scan with refined touch).
You must draw your own sky if you wants yours to be accepted in AP
Maybe you don't need the face of saber on the left hand corner.
Maybe make red saber as the reflection of blue saber will be good
and you must change the fonts and make effect on the font
You must draw your own sky if you wants yours to be accepted in AP
Maybe you don't need the face of saber on the left hand corner.
Maybe make red saber as the reflection of blue saber will be good
and you must change the fonts and make effect on the font
Rukawa11Hmmm...in my opinion...
I think your scan quality is low and it's a lil bit noisy
especially the background...you better work on that...
then I think you should removed the red in girl there and find another text...
hope this help you..
I agree with the quality being low and noisy...and with the text...try finding some better fonts like on dafont.com
=^^= Dont worry...my wallpaper that I thought I did really well on was not accepted...a bit disappointing...and frustrating. =v_v= Im new here too so..youre not alone =^^=
It look kinda nice on the thumbnail, but once you see the blown up size... ^^;;
the way you have the two of her oriented on the right side seems pretty arbitrary and it gives the feeling that she's floating in the air then falling...
i would say that this wallpaper is somewhat lacking in composition...
background work is very important... make sure you pick a good scan and make a background that matches it
the way you have the two of her oriented on the right side seems pretty arbitrary and it gives the feeling that she's floating in the air then falling...
i would say that this wallpaper is somewhat lacking in composition...
background work is very important... make sure you pick a good scan and make a background that matches it
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