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Gunslinger Girl :)
Hello :) Well, i ve worked on this wall during 4 months...now , it's finnally finished!:) *yepee*
lol, i would like you to comment this wall... i know that some things miss in this wall, but i don't really know why.. can you help me? :)
Thank you!^^ !
lol, i would like you to comment this wall... i know that some things miss in this wall, but i don't really know why.. can you help me? :)
Thank you!^^ !
I think it is perfect!
I like it ;)
I like it ;)
Really? :) thank you :)
but i would like to improve it... ;/
but i would like to improve it... ;/
I agree, for me its perfect too!*:)
but if you want to improve it maybe wait for other suggestions..
i love it so i cant tell you ehat to improve!*:D
good luck!*:)
but if you want to improve it maybe wait for other suggestions..
i love it so i cant tell you ehat to improve!*:D
good luck!*:)
1 year 11 months ago
Well for me it's pretty good looking but if you really want to improve it you always can add some outlines around the characters and stuff you've got in the wall.. Like the background stuff : add some colored outlines,
On the objects in the foreground, add some black outlines and maybe some more on the clothes...
And for some more technical details you should correct the perspective on the window... The lines shouldn't be horizontal but a bit more with an angle...
It's all I have for now but I'll come back later :)
Keep it up... I also feel like the color of the eyes are a bit too saturated and bright for that kind of soft color wall...
On the objects in the foreground, add some black outlines and maybe some more on the clothes...
And for some more technical details you should correct the perspective on the window... The lines shouldn't be horizontal but a bit more with an angle...
It's all I have for now but I'll come back later :)
Keep it up... I also feel like the color of the eyes are a bit too saturated and bright for that kind of soft color wall...
I come here in peace...
Or not...
:D
1 year 11 months ago
Okay, if you want to improve it, first you've gotta give mroe details to the eyes, make them more expressive, particulary Henrietta's. Her gun needs more shadows and details too. And as for Rico's rifle, which is what I supposed you wanted to draw it's very difficult to identify, then again maybe it's not even a rifle. So on that point I'm not sure what to say... I'll check it out later, because it's a very good wall on the whole! Keep at it!
1 year 11 months ago
Wow its really Nice ^-^ Go And Submit it Because its NICE ^^
Good Work ;) i Like it :):)
Good Work ;) i Like it :):)
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1 year 11 months ago
Cool wall. But,see if you could add more brushes, text, and textures to it. Good luck
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1 year 11 months ago
I'm not sure about adding some brush but at least some texture could be of use of course... But not on every thing...
I come here in peace...
Or not...
:D
Thank you for your comments :)
well, ive tried to apply what you said... wo , now , i have that :P
Plz comment and help me :) thnx!! ^^
well, ive tried to apply what you said... wo , now , i have that :P
Plz comment and help me :) thnx!! ^^
1 year 11 months ago
Hi there!
i think the last version looks much better... :)
i like it a lot... i thing you should change a bit the shadows at the back.. on the wall... like the one behind the curtains... i think that the shadows are too dark and strong looking... i would make them less visible.. less darker and a bit soften so that they blend better...
that's all i can say...
i think the rest is nice and well done... although i'm not so sure about the colors of the characters but anyway... is not that bad.. maybe some little touches there and.. you are done :)
wish you luck!!
kisses!
i think the last version looks much better... :)
i like it a lot... i thing you should change a bit the shadows at the back.. on the wall... like the one behind the curtains... i think that the shadows are too dark and strong looking... i would make them less visible.. less darker and a bit soften so that they blend better...
that's all i can say...
i think the rest is nice and well done... although i'm not so sure about the colors of the characters but anyway... is not that bad.. maybe some little touches there and.. you are done :)
wish you luck!!
kisses!
Man thats NICE i would subit it if i was you it really really good
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Well, i think i can't do bettter now... :) it's already fine , i think. I will submit it this weekend, plz continue to comment it!:D
Thank you :)
edit:oops! the shadow of the curtains! :)
Thank you :)
edit:oops! the shadow of the curtains! :)
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1 year 11 months ago
This new version is better the background behind the window is really nice looking... For the wall I think it's a bit rough but it's fine anyway...
But you still need to get better shading and clean outlines and shapes on the weapons... They look like plastic right now...
The white font on the black stuff is a bit too thin... It should be more like an army font.. A bit thicker...
Good luck :)
But you still need to get better shading and clean outlines and shapes on the weapons... They look like plastic right now...
The white font on the black stuff is a bit too thin... It should be more like an army font.. A bit thicker...
Good luck :)
I come here in peace...
Or not...
:D
Oki :) <working on it> :P
Lol, yeah, im trying to change it... ;/ but it's hard, i don't really know how to make them "metalic" ... :(
edit :
a bit better? :o
But you still need to get better shading and clean outlines and shapes on the weapons... They look like plastic right now...
Lol, yeah, im trying to change it... ;/ but it's hard, i don't really know how to make them "metalic" ... :(
edit :
a bit better? :o
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