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Eureka Seven Wallpaper
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I made this... umm, it needs some work, just thought I'd put it up here and ask for some help.
• Your vectoring could use some more work… specially the eyes, try making the outline of the eyes a little thicker. I like the BG, it’s simple and doesn’t look too saturated. Remember to add your signature and probably adding some text would also help.
• Maybe going for the vector-sort-of-wallpaper could fit the theme a lot better. Consider it. Search for “vector brushes” in DevianArt.
• Maybe going for the vector-sort-of-wallpaper could fit the theme a lot better. Consider it. Search for “vector brushes” in DevianArt.
We are the Earth Intruders...
With our feet thumbing,
With our feet marching,
Grinding the skeptics into the soil.
I fixed the eyes, and I can't think of a good title... Do the eyes still need more work? There were no pupils on the screenshot, and that was the only thing I could think of to make it better. If there's more wrong with them, please be more specific, cause I don't really know what else to do. It's only the second vector I've ever made, so I'm still developing my sillz. :-P
The shadow area of the bg is dynamic, while the rest of the bg is very 2-d...it looks quite crisp and nice, but lighting on both the characters and bg (thinking ansiotropic filtering here =P) can be improved to make it look a little better. even if you are going for more abstract, having the bg look less "flat" might be good
oh...and good for you for making widescreen!
oh...and good for you for making widescreen!
Hofodomo01the shadow area of the bg is dynamic, while the rest of the bg is very 2-d...it looks quite crisp and nice, but lighting on both the characters and bg (thinking ansiotropic filtering here =P) can be improved to make it look a little better. even if you are going for more abstract, having the bg look less "flat" might be good
oh...and good for you for making widescreen!
I'll work on the lighting thing, but as for the background, do you think I should keep this one and just work on it, or do you think I should go for a whole different one? And, ya, I have a widescreen display, and I love finding good widescreen wallpapers, so I thought I should make one.
Ok, I changed the lighting effects in the background, worked on the shadows on the vector and the eye glare, and I added a title. Tell me what you think! (and tell me if you think if the title is corny or stupid, or something).
Well you're doing great so far. I'll just suggest that you should lighten up the text a bit. But not too much. The text are a bit hard for me to read. So maybe you should make the outer glow a bit brighter. Also, I think you should make the text a bit smaller. Good luck! ^^
The "tog" on the together part of the text isnt standing out well enough...consider putting larger glow on soft light or overlay settings (play with the colour)...your bg is actually pretty cool, just how it's presented is a little bit of a problem. you've improved it alot already...
personally, i suggest keeping the pattern, but set it to a softer blend mode over a scenic background (sxc.hu for some good stock photos). the lines look cool, but it's too...lonely =P
and some texure overlays might look cool over such a clean vector
but very good and precise vector job !
personally, i suggest keeping the pattern, but set it to a softer blend mode over a scenic background (sxc.hu for some good stock photos). the lines look cool, but it's too...lonely =P
and some texure overlays might look cool over such a clean vector
but very good and precise vector job !
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All, i suggest is making the text smaller and putting it in a spot where the background is grey (to match the black patterns that are already in the background :3) on than that, nice job, good luck!^^
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Another version. I decided that I didn't like the title very much, so I think I'll just put the name of the show in there instead. The title was kinda lame. I also found that way so one can actually read it. Tell me what you think, cause I really don't know about it... thanks!
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Vectors are like drawings. When you don't vary the line width there not as dynamic as one that did have differn't widths on the characters so thats what I suggest you do that to your vector ( its very nice by the way).
As for you latest one I suggest changing the font on your text.
As for you latest one I suggest changing the font on your text.
I like the idea you have...but I think it would look much better if you didn't have a drop shadow coming from the characters. That's just me though :P
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