__THISRES__100357.jpg "Trick or Treat by °chanelqueen17 1 month 2 weeks ago")
Tsubasa RC wallpaper
Heyo guys.
Is here anything I need to fix? Hope you guys like it.
Thanks everyone. ^^
3 years 3 months ago
The text needs to be a bit more subtle. Being dead center where it is doesn't look right to me. It makes it look more like an adverting poster or something. Subtler text, more carefully placed would have a better effect as far as I'm concerned.
Thanks for the advice. I made the text smaller and I moved it to the corner.
Personally, I think it looks great the way it is! But, If I were you, I would place the 'credits' a tad bit lower. ^-^
3 years 3 months ago
Yeah. I think that looks a lot better now with the text moved. That's all I have. Good luck.
The text still kind of sticks in my face after looking at both version. ;P
Well, first of all, I'd say to make the text more blended into the wall.
Second of all, the scan needs a bit more cleaning up. Especially around those big pieces of cloth, and Sakura's hair.
I can't really see much of the background, but it looks like a night scene. They just look a bit.. bright? I'd make them a bit pailer.
Well, that's all I have to say! I'll be waiting for the next version.
Well, first of all, I'd say to make the text more blended into the wall.
Second of all, the scan needs a bit more cleaning up. Especially around those big pieces of cloth, and Sakura's hair.
I can't really see much of the background, but it looks like a night scene. They just look a bit.. bright? I'd make them a bit pailer.
Well, that's all I have to say! I'll be waiting for the next version.
3 years 3 months ago
Wow its Nice Wallpaper i Love it ^-^ Why Don't you Submit it ?
Thanks for all the advices. ^^
I made the font more subtle and made the wallpaper not so bright. I added more brushes... if you guys can tell. XD I've done a lot of cleaning on the scan too.
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5738/grace1wi7.jpg
Hope you guys like the improvements. Thanks. =]
I made the font more subtle and made the wallpaper not so bright. I added more brushes... if you guys can tell. XD I've done a lot of cleaning on the scan too.
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5738/grace1wi7.jpg
Hope you guys like the improvements. Thanks. =]
#380536 Quote Report Edited by ~inREVERIEforever 3 years 3 months ago
Its very nice! the black text at the bottom is too in-your-face, though
Cooll...
i think..there isa no problem in that wall..
so why not trying to submit that..
i think..there isa no problem in that wall..
so why not trying to submit that..
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I like the way you did it~ it's very nice! ^_^
If the texts are put at a corner, it will be better
and also the whole wall is a little too bright, just a little bit
others are good, the color and the style =]
and also the whole wall is a little too bright, just a little bit
others are good, the color and the style =]
Theres a wall like this but using a blue motiff
with same vector
its great tho good job yo
with same vector
its great tho good job yo
It is nice
You know what will look great and will end with the problem of the text? change the color of the stroke from red to that dark red that you use in the borders of the main picture ^_^
I LOVE this picture!!
I LOVE this picture!!
The text doesn't really bother me :3 It's just that Syaorans hair x.x The extraction is a bit off...you could improve on it I think, heres a little something to help you along the way ;D Another thing also bothering me is the background x.x I don't really think it blends well but maybe changing the hue of it...actually the text is just bothering me because the stroke you've put on looks jagged.
Ah! I just noticed the background has a moon in it XDDDDDDDDD Ok well make the moon smaller, fix the lighting on it and the scan, and the sky is alright I think ^^ Nice job so far!! Keep it up ^___^
Ah! I just noticed the background has a moon in it XDDDDDDDDD Ok well make the moon smaller, fix the lighting on it and the scan, and the sky is alright I think ^^ Nice job so far!! Keep it up ^___^