Ok this will be my first wall if its accepted in the gallery i hope it gets accepted beacuse it took me a long time to try to clean this wall but thats why im here i need your help.
ok here is the part wher i ask how much more work do you think i shude put in this wall like more stoff or something so plz help me beacuse i dont now lol here is my wall any comment is
accepted thank you. ps i like it the way it is but ill do any thing to make it get accepted





ok i tryed it and i made it a bit darker and tryed clean a bit more but can't
victure it for some resan lol can any one help me more

I think it would be rejected, not because it is bad, but the problem is that you use a screenshot, for a wall it is not a good idea, i advise you to use a better scan or to vector it

Well i think the chara is to bright, and if you want clean and cool chara design, you should do what vectorman said start Vectoring XD

Hmm .. well your wallpaper is good but i think you need (( Textures )) Maybe will made your wallpaper To be Good i Think !! But Add More Things Like .. : Change The Text - Add Star Maybe - Texture Like i Tell you ))
And More Things But When You Finish it Tell me i want to saw it , Good Luck ;)

Image quality aside, what bothers me is the composition, really. I know IchiRuki both have to be there, but the placement on the wall...they just take up too much space, ^^;

But other than that (which is my personal preference), I would listen to their suggestions regarding the main image quality. And the mist concentrated niear Ichigo's elbow is kind of distracting.