First wallpaper
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3 years 7 months ago
I dont know how to put the wallpaper when you can see it so i give the link.
Its my first one tho and yes its kinda noob but i will make more...still learning. Anyone can tell me to put the link in a picture so you can see it?
The link:
http://img190.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kittycat124af.jpg
Its my first one tho and yes its kinda noob but i will make more...still learning. Anyone can tell me to put the link in a picture so you can see it?
The link:
http://img190.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kittycat124af.jpg
Everything looks great, but the main character of the wall is kinda blurred, and contrasts with the background too much, which ruins the whole effect.
3 years 7 months ago
I like it. But I'm going to have to agree with the person above me. The person is a little blurry. And the character and background don't really go
The bg is kinda messy, the words are not very easy to read, i mean the black ones^^
good try for a first wall
the quality of the scan is kinda bad
it would also be better without that red outline stuff
make sure brushes aren't on the char. because it looks bad.
have your sig at the bottom so it is covered up by the taskbar.
so cleaning the wallpaper up and make everything more clear and distinct, will be better
( the right side especially , it's hard to tell what's there)
C: good luck~
good try for a first wall
the quality of the scan is kinda bad
it would also be better without that red outline stuff
make sure brushes aren't on the char. because it looks bad.
have your sig at the bottom so it is covered up by the taskbar.
so cleaning the wallpaper up and make everything more clear and distinct, will be better
( the right side especially , it's hard to tell what's there)
C: good luck~
3 years 7 months ago
Ya, the scan quality looks pretty poor. need to do more than just blur it. the bg is an iteresting idea but is abit too busy. it all needs to be blended together better.
nice start though :)
nice start though :)
1. The scan looks pretty bad quality, you need to fix that.
2. The blending layer/opacity you did looks strange, you shouldnt be able to "see through" her so much, its annoying at the bottom.
3. Extraction isnt good, You tried to put a fuzzy stroke on her and it went all around her to the places you didnt properly erase. If you did, then erase those anyway, they look weird.
4. Fix the text. The black on the right is hard to read, and your signature, preferrably, would go across the bottom in an easy to read color.
5. My japanese is bad, but wtf is ano?
6. Despite so many problems, they aren't unfixable, and I really like the left side where you did the grid and the leaves (plus the swirly brush used at the bottom is good). I do like it alot more than I let on, so work out the problems and I look forward to it being finished. Good luck
2. The blending layer/opacity you did looks strange, you shouldnt be able to "see through" her so much, its annoying at the bottom.
3. Extraction isnt good, You tried to put a fuzzy stroke on her and it went all around her to the places you didnt properly erase. If you did, then erase those anyway, they look weird.
4. Fix the text. The black on the right is hard to read, and your signature, preferrably, would go across the bottom in an easy to read color.
5. My japanese is bad, but wtf is ano?
6. Despite so many problems, they aren't unfixable, and I really like the left side where you did the grid and the leaves (plus the swirly brush used at the bottom is good). I do like it alot more than I let on, so work out the problems and I look forward to it being finished. Good luck
#269089 Quote Report Edited by ~fullmetal21 3 years 7 months ago
The background is cool
but it doesn't match with the character
what does ano mean
but it doesn't match with the character
what does ano mean
It just means "um..."
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3 years 7 months ago
I will try to make it better.
Lol just hit the delete button...
other than the quality issues, the "ano" looks weird and out of place to me
but yeah, i really like the left side too
other than the quality issues, the "ano" looks weird and out of place to me
but yeah, i really like the left side too
3 years 7 months ago
I made another one..the scan is from megatokyo ^^ hope that you guys like this one more...
http://img265.imageshack.us/my.php?image=samethoughts0tw.jpg
http://img265.imageshack.us/my.php?image=samethoughts0tw.jpg
Hi there..
bg's ok but the characters are not really fit in that background. Guess it's because they're black & white..I think you should make another one with a different scan...:)
bg's ok but the characters are not really fit in that background. Guess it's because they're black & white..I think you should make another one with a different scan...:)
3 years 7 months ago
I should findt a colored one? okay i will try ;D
The bg looks too real.
don't' scratch this scan if you like it
you can more drawing like bg because the characters look like they are just finished from drawing
C: (pencil stroke drawing)
don't' scratch this scan if you like it
you can more drawing like bg because the characters look like they are just finished from drawing
C: (pencil stroke drawing)
Umh.... It doesn;t match ith it background. If you wnt to use sketch, maybe you can use sketch as background also. Or simple solor.
Heheh sorry, I can't make wallpaper well. So I can;t give you many comments. Sorry
Heheh sorry, I can't make wallpaper well. So I can;t give you many comments. Sorry
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