__THISRES__100357.jpg "Trick or Treat by °chanelqueen17 1 month 2 weeks ago")
A new wallie. And it's a School Rumble one, too.
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This time, unlike the shana wp, it's an official try to submit. Didn't took me much time to make, though the first idea was a lot different. Still kinda amateur work, but I really want it to be good, so please, write your suggestions.
Without any of my further blabbing, just check it.
Thanks.
Without any of my further blabbing, just check it.
Thanks.
3 years 7 months ago
I LOVE LOVE LOVE the paper, its like phowar amazingness pretty! but the photos ruin it for me, its like ooh all sketch like and good and then........ well picture frames have become so mainstream, if you could change them to maybe color or even black and white sketches as well, that would make this a very very very good wallpaper.
the pen needs more of a shadow, it pops up for me and looks rendered
as it is, its quite good too though, and id say you will be accepted.
the pen needs more of a shadow, it pops up for me and looks rendered
as it is, its quite good too though, and id say you will be accepted.
^^ it's very intersting
but some shadows needs to be added. shadows shouldn't be too long or too dark, but adding a shadow(for example to the pen) will make it seem like it's on the desk more.
the wood is not too pretty but,
it's a very nice idea
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but some shadows needs to be added. shadows shouldn't be too long or too dark, but adding a shadow(for example to the pen) will make it seem like it's on the desk more.
the wood is not too pretty but,
it's a very nice idea
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Just as I thought. How 'bout now? Is it a better or worse idea?
(changed the cotrast of the wood, fixed some shadows and played with the photos)
(changed the cotrast of the wood, fixed some shadows and played with the photos)
Wow, it looks really good, really realistic paper. Though You might try adding a few more peices of stationary or something. But really good actually ;P
^_^_^ Shinobu is mine! *Rawr* ^_^_^
Yeap better,
except i can't really telll what the stain on the photo are, if they are stains , then it needs to go on the table also, i think...orelse it kinda looks a bit weird
if you're gonna add a stationary, don't add random things like paperclip or something, add a pencil at most.
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except i can't really telll what the stain on the photo are, if they are stains , then it needs to go on the table also, i think...orelse it kinda looks a bit weird
if you're gonna add a stationary, don't add random things like paperclip or something, add a pencil at most.
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3 years 7 months ago
Looks neat :) i would suggest looking up a tutorial on making water/ink drops. i'm not sure i like the color you chose for the pics, it's sort of clashing with the color of the wood. i'm not sure what color you would use, maybe lighten the wood?
it doesn't quite feel complete to me. hmmm not really sure what to suggest.
good luck ;)
it doesn't quite feel complete to me. hmmm not really sure what to suggest.
good luck ;)
Nice one...though the colors of the photos kinda bother me..maybe choose one which will blend with the wood...and the stains make me wonder why it's there...
but all in all it's good.:)
but all in all it's good.:)
Wow, nice wallpaper !! i love school rumble hehehe
effects are really well made, glad you changed the shadow of the pen, now it looks more real, more blended with the bg and everything else...
the only thing i would have to say, is that is hard to know what those stains are...the stains in the table and the paper, those are tear drops ?? if they are, is kind of hard to realize...
effects are really well made, glad you changed the shadow of the pen, now it looks more real, more blended with the bg and everything else...
the only thing i would have to say, is that is hard to know what those stains are...the stains in the table and the paper, those are tear drops ?? if they are, is kind of hard to realize...
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