is this ready?
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I don't like the "thing" Lulu is holding, but other than that, I think that YES, it is very ready. ^^
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Any suggestion you want to suggest from me about what he holding?
Yeah, beside the thing on his hand, it's really okay... Maybe just remove it. The text is kinda strange too. I don't know how, maybe it's too white/clear? Maybe make it more blend with the background...
Okey..I'll do something with the white text there...
I would say it is ok...Good job...


1 year 3 months ago
Its good, but I agree that the thing he is holding should be removed.
Good Luck!
Good Luck!

Not sure why it was rejected though >_>
It's "Rebellion," not "Rebelion." Two 'l's, two 'l's. 
Is the "thing" everybody's referring to to dark energy ball?
I think it looks great.
Now if you guys were talking about the unidentified, folder-like object in his right arm, then, well, I guess it doesn't ruin the picture.

Is the "thing" everybody's referring to to dark energy ball?

I think it looks great.

Now if you guys were talking about the unidentified, folder-like object in his right arm, then, well, I guess it doesn't ruin the picture.

I still don't like the text. Maybe remove it, or blend it to the background. Maybe you should put it as "join" wall instead of single? I dunno, never made a wall using someone's vector. Try asking the mod.
Thanks for all your comments and opinions.. 

It does look like its missing something.... BUT! Besides that its nice! I agree with the others about the text... I'd make it the same color as the floral stuff in the background. 

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