Well I'm trying to work more in Photoshop and I started to work on a piece that might have been a little more than what I could had handled... So I took a part of the picture I had already worked on and just fixed the chest area a little and I thought I'd share it so maybe I can get some critique along with some nice comments (please).

So... here we go!
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5089/forfunken.png

Oh and for those who want to see what the "bigger" project I was working on, it's this: http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/8541/screeniev.png (I've got an entire body, arms and legs... and tail to do.)

OH! before I forget, I basically drew a "human-ish" version of "Ken" from "Urban Vermin" (And his older brother Abe in the screenshot) and I personally like it...

I know I still have a lot of improving and hard work ahead of me...
Thanks a lot everyone! >_<

Well, the painting is really nice.
But the draw itself is kinda annoying .-.
Try do a better job with the nose and the suit.
I like the hair painting as well.
Good job and good luck ;o

I really like how you painted the his hair! It's so smooth and has depth! And I think you're a good painter. However, I think the tips of his bangs should be sharper because the details in his face are pretty sharp, so blurry hair doesn't really match. His eyes look a bit far apart, but since he's not really human and has a short nose, I think that kinda makes it look interesting! But his gold eye is not turned enough toward us so he looks like he has a bit of a lazy eye. The additional person from the screencap also needs to have the further eye turned more toward us.

Still, you're doing a good job and you should continue! Your hard work will pay off!

These are so cool! I'm just gonna comment on the first one...
Try something different with the shadow's under the dude's eyes. They are really dark- unless that's what you were going for. To make his face look more realistic, add lighter areas where the light hits his face, instead of only shadow. Also, light will glance off his eyes, so add some light and dark there.
Amazing job so far!

Wow you guys, these are some really good advice you're giving me! Thank you guys so much!

to ilay's comment:
Yeah, the nose and suit are something that was bugging me a tad... I should just completely re-do that part. As for the suit, I need to go and study a suit a little, I'm not even that sure if I'm drawing it right...
Thank for for the compliment on the hair and the encouragement!

to luna's comment:
Hmmm... I never thought of the tips of the bangs.. So I should make it sharper like... in more details or I should make it more solid at the tips? Perhaps I shall try both! details in hair is always happiness! 8D
Oh, but you make a good point to say that the eyes are a little too far apart, That's how I normally would draw them ("distance apart" wise) I'll be sure to make that correction soon!
Darn that golden eye! XD I'll have to continue to exam that part myself, I seam to be blind to that mistake I've made but not entirely! (I kinda see it)
Thank you very much for pointing those out, I've already learned a few things thank you you :'D

to urbanphoenix09's comment:
Yeah, i wanted to go dark under his eyes, to give the feel like bagsk, but even I'm a tad dissatisfy of how it came out... (I'm trying to save that)
Add lighter colors? Good point to bring up, I paint over the darker colors but when I go back I only really focus on the shadow area... I'll try to see what I can do!
Hmm.. if you mean "shade in the white part (and part of the iris)" kind of thing then that's a good idea... I can't believe I forgot Thanks a lot! 8D


Thank you guys once again for all your help! You guys helped me a lot! I'll try to do some edits here and there, fix up some mistakes and then I'll try to post an "updated" version on here :'D