Well hi guys I'm new to Anime Paper. In fact I just installed photoshop several minutes ago. It's all very confusing. However. I found this nice pic of Asakura and HAD to made a wallie!

I prefer simplistic designs with not too much so you can place icons.

well here it is. Comments are always nice.

Try not to leave a sharping edge on the character, now her legs seems to be chopped off><. Try to add some effect there, just don't make the edge stay naked.

Also, did you add some thick lines around the girl @@? There are none on the girl. I just think this thick line is odd.

I am not a good waller, so i am only comment up to this stage~
Add oil for your wall
cheer up ~!

Luxury ~

Hi, first off welcome to animepaper. Secondly, be sure to read the faq lots of great info there. Next, please use thumbnails or links to your images when posting them here, that prevents them from being cut-off or breaking the style sheet.

Now, onto the comments for your wall...

First, the extraction looks decent to me, although there are a few things to fix/make better... parts of her leg and skirt which are fairly jagged and could be re-done. I highly recommend extracting with a 1 pixel feather to help reduce those lines. The right edge of her skirt could use a little re-drawing/filling in also, namely the shadow edge. The top of her hair also looks a bit odd, and though it seems like she is supposed to have a ribbon in her hair (though that is questionable due to the snow(?) falling on her), it's being totally cut out by the white BG and no lines.

The background could use some work... there is nothing wrong with a simple bg, but that is a bit too simple to be accepted likely. Maybe try different shapes or something to liven it up more?

I really love this simplistic style but..

Yeah there is a but :D

First, you should not let her legs shopped like this... But that you know already.
Also the text need to be a bit more interesting and fit a bit more the background or the character... It's a bit simple right now and it could use some more details or originality.

As for the background... You could also make it a bit more interesting... First you need to think about what are those flying squares ? Then add some shading and why not continue with the idea of the sort of snow?

Try to take putt a little more time and efforts in your wall it's the first condition to be accepted on AP! :)

Good luck and don't give up I feel you can do nice stuff if you work on it! ;)

Where is this scan from? It's nice to tell us cause then we wont comment on stuffs that are not from you.

To me ... the girl you did it very well bcause no noise on her, but about the background im think you can put some effect so that can make it more nice(can make blurry blurry effect to make people attacked by her...hehe^^) , any way this is 1st time you did it, whish you can do it very well soon and share with your design ^^, ganbateh.

First : Welcome to AP
2nd : did you vector the scan ?
3 . nice bg you made but your wallpaper neet a text here's good site for nice fonts i hope its help you ^^
www.dafont.com

GoodLuck
AG.