As it says in the description, this is my first wallpaper. As of now I don't plan on adding anything else to the image and would love some feedback as to if I should change/edit the wallpaper.



Thanks.
Charlotte

Almost all of the pictures has sides that are "simply cut down". I'm talking about the edges with straight lines. You should get rid of them somehow.

Actually i dont suggest using the screenshots from the ending song in wallpapers cause firstly they are quiet blur and then the colours also look abit faded ( or is it just me... ) yup & as mentioned by ddv, the pics are just cut up & pasted together, eg honey's fingers are cut off & you can see a line there. its a good first try but i think maybe doing another wall may be easier then trying to fix this one up. yup that's what i think. ok all the best! =)

I think you have a great idea for a wallpaper...
but i agree with Ddv, it seems just like a "cut and paste" screenshots and you can notice the borders between images (it might need some cleanup and work).

I hope it helps.

Phossil.