here it is :)

• Remember to add you signature!

• I like the scan an the “feathers” BG. But the right side of the wall feels a little empty (you could add some feather outlines in white)
• The font it’s OK but the red color… really doesn’t go with the wall’s theme you could try some white fonts (or light grey) with some light-blurry shadows.

• The scan extraction and merge with the BG it’s excellent, it only needs some more “stuff” to be added.

here's a bigger version!


i'll add some feathers and stuff, and re-post.

Revised! what do you think?

There seems to be too much font...but the spider web on her is REALLY cool...it has potential ;)

I really love the concept of your wall and I even love it more because its Princess Ai (there aren't very many walls of her). The image of the character is okay in quality however I would have to disagree with seifer-chan with the merging of the image in the background. You can see the difference and contrast of the scan and the image specially at the bottom left of the wallpaper just below the web of ribbons, you can almost see a line. There are also some visible round brush strokes in the background. The placement of the text is okay but the contrast between the black background and red text isn't very visble. I can suggest that you can try a white color on your text. I can't wait to see your finished work and I hope to see it in the gallery!

How do you mean, too much font?

Thank you so much for your kind words!

The feathers you added are a bit on the jagged side. So also is the line of cloth strip the runs from the scan to the right side of the screen. That's really jagged. Revector those and you I think you're good to go there. Also, the font looks funny, not because the font itself is funny but because the color inside the loops of the letters isn't the same shade of grey as the background. Fix the color there and think the font will work.

Since the background is bland, but you want the point to be the scan and the lyrics, take bits of the words and randomly scatter them in the background but blended so that they are fuzzy and dark. Sort of like visual echos.

Ganbatte, ne?