It is my first wallpaper,it take my for 3 days to created.I wanted to create a wallpaper in a theme of "light",finally come to be this wallpaper

please give a comment for my first work ^^

please follow this link!

http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q92/white_satan/My%20wallpapers/1.jpg

Rite first thing 1st:
the image resolution need to be a minimum of 1024x768 AP Submission FAQ
apart from that, i think it s quite well done the scan blend in well with the white background.
there are just little notes:
1) there s a copyright in your scan. i think i would be better to remove it and replace it somewhere with your signature.
2) the overall image is a little bright, you may want to tone down a little or make the background darker to contrast against your scan.
3) a slight worry that once you increase the resolution, all your contrast and focus may go out of the window, just need to keep trial and error.

it s a good start! change the things above would see your wall in the gallery soon, keep up the good work.

I agree with what mchicken said, but i also think that you should change teh font of the letters...
maybe like wa cursive script, but that is only my opinion.. and also the light, mchickes is right you need to contrast the scan with the background and anything, make it darker it is a little bit to bright, also my opinion..
hope this helps! good luck!*:)

Well almost everything has been said but few details still need to be pointed :
The little bunny doll on the side are all the same in different position.. You should probably try to find more scans of it and add it in different positions and face expression... Or at least make them different size...
I'm a bit concern about the outline of those bunny... Don't seem like they are fine.. But let's wait for a better resolution...

I'm wondering if it's not photobucket which resize walls again -___-
Change hosting site or found the option to upload 1Mo files... I've heard of it...

You can probably go for an other kind of font but this one is cute :)

Good luck! ;)