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My First Wall
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Hi,
i have done my first wall and
now i want to know what you think about it?
What can i change?? etc.
Click here to see the Wall
i have done my first wall and
now i want to know what you think about it?
What can i change?? etc.
Click here to see the Wall
1 year 8 months ago
First impression it is way to bright, and the background looks a bit weird with the main character.
Font type also not quite my taste.
Font type also not quite my taste.
I think you better make it clearer... For the character and also the background, make it dark, with starts, moon,
it's a bit classic, but It'll be nicer, I think.
And, erase those words on the right side, it's nice words, but why don't you try to explore more??
Adding something that can beautify it.
Good luck with your wall ^^
it's a bit classic, but It'll be nicer, I think.
And, erase those words on the right side, it's nice words, but why don't you try to explore more??
Adding something that can beautify it.
Good luck with your wall ^^
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HuarruFirst impression it is way to bright, and the background looks a bit weird with the main character.
Font type also not quite my taste.
As Huarru said it s far too bright, the whole image looks white wash, there wasn't enough contrast between background and your main character
the text on the right is not readable, advise to change the blending more or a different colour.
appreciated your background, but make it slightly visible would be better.
also what theme do you want this wall to have.. as in what is the main focus ?
good luck.. almost there..
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