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Akira WIP
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2 years 7 months ago
An Akira wallpaper I've been making for about 3 days.
I'd like to see some ideas on improvements/corrections before uploading it :)
I'd like to see some ideas on improvements/corrections before uploading it :)
C: it's really good
if you can get rid of/darken up a little of the little strip of white right next to his head, i think it will be better
also, the words i am tetsuo, if you can make that smaller as you go further, then it will look more like on the wall because of the perspective the walls are to us
if you can get rid of/darken up a little of the little strip of white right next to his head, i think it will be better
also, the words i am tetsuo, if you can make that smaller as you go further, then it will look more like on the wall because of the perspective the walls are to us
Like ~blu3angl say:
put words one the wall little smaller..that will be look much better :)
The rest of wallpaper look for me very nice :)
put words one the wall little smaller..that will be look much better :)
The rest of wallpaper look for me very nice :)
Add shade and light to the blood and text to make it bland to the wall more. Nice job
It's already nice as it is, just the text like everybody say. It's a good idea to change the text, the font, and the position of the text since it's not so good with the current pov. Maybe you can try to make it look like grafitti on the wall.
Suigintou!
Woah thats a awesome wall, where did you get/how did you create that hallway please tell me!
as for the wall it looks awesome, jsut aint fan of the grungy overlayer effect but that is also probably there for the contrast to blend the scan in and stuff so just leave it that way..
so as said many times add depth to the brush and the text layer and maybe add some more text/blood/cracks/stuff to give ti all a more evil vibe
awesome job so far
as for the wall it looks awesome, jsut aint fan of the grungy overlayer effect but that is also probably there for the contrast to blend the scan in and stuff so just leave it that way..
so as said many times add depth to the brush and the text layer and maybe add some more text/blood/cracks/stuff to give ti all a more evil vibe
awesome job so far
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