This is a wall i just finished...do you think AP would accept it?

And please give me all kinds of comments on how to improve on it...thanks



http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5048/walluptx8.jpg

No AP wouldnt accept it, I think your trying to put to many pics into one wall and they arent flowing I would remove them and only focus on one image, also they dont blend into the BG

I agree with swordfish II maybe you should follow what he says..

Yes... And they also say that adding a real background to a character scan is not advisable.. (Since you have to make the character blend with the background more and so on) Of course, it will need a lot of work too! @_@ Also the character scan should be extracted really well and stuff like that... @_@

Hum first don't put so many scan on a wallpaper, then if you used only one scan, try to extracted wall, see the scan of kaoru and kenshin, look their hair, there are some artifact so try to make a good extraction it is a very important thing that you have to learn, and then for the bg don't put image like, you must create a bg not to put an image

Umm...I really hv some problems extracting coz I don't have Adobe Photoshop or Corral...I use Ulead Photoimpact instead...

how about this one?


http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/3675/wallupgo1.jpg

I like your AP , it's how a best times who Kenshin and Kaoru we have.Basci but effective your idea in this AP.

~DarkKaisar: I'm glad you liked it...but following what the others said, it won't get accepted by AP...what do you guys think about the second one? I tried making my own background for a change...

1st one:
too many scans at once .. as others have already said, focus on one, clean out the scan thoroughly, and we'll see.
i understand you are using photoimpact (not the most effective program to make wall for submission to AP) try to at least get photoshop element or paint shop pro.

2nd one:
gd job on the cleaning on the front scan. but the back .. the top rite compass thing is poking into kenshins head and you have some other image underneath it (right on the eye, too).
I can understand all the lightening but the flames are beyond me. the main thing is that it s not to the same quality (pixalated) as the others. i mean you can make the whole background pixalated, but not half and half. in addition the darker image of kenshin is clearly not the same image size as the rest of the picture, you can see a lot of artifacts on it .. you may want to reduce colour noise on it.

to be frank with you, both walls need lots of work before getting to the AP standard.
add oil, you'll get there in the end.

The background image of Kenshin on the second one looks like a screenshot.

Then no, you must play with a model image, your you must change the bottom to create a new image, and noncuts since you have done. (sorry by post previous in Spanish :P)

The scan is good. but the white in the silouette.. mmmm.. remove it.
the images in the bg. are screens. and.. they are pixelated.. !
the ninja star if is that.. are on the middle of the head of the bg kenshin. wrong.

try to find a way to vetor the images.. maybe..the screen behind with pensative kenshin works with the wall.

but you need to vectorize it.

use a brush and play with that to make a more...personalized ray.

the font of the text change it. don't belong to the wall.
and is too big.

this ap. will be rejected.

be more creative.. and take more time with your idea..

mosh