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I want to upload my first wall in AP. What I have to do?
Ok, I have done my first wall for animepaper. Now I want to put it in the web. Please, can someone tell me what I have to do. I mean I have to show you the wall and you have to comment it, isn't it? I'm not sure...
Ok, I mean I have to put it here my wall and wait your coments. Here it is, is from Pokémon:
It's beautiful!! i like it alot! you don't really need the disclaimer at the bottom, though you can leave it if you like because it doesn't take anything away from the wall. I'm not sure that the ________ (fish? not sure what they're called, sorry) are actually neccecary, but I think it is fine as is. great job!
~Hisui
PS-- you may want to wait a little while before submiting until a more senior member comments, because their comments are usually really helpful.
~Hisui
PS-- you may want to wait a little while before submiting until a more senior member comments, because their comments are usually really helpful.
Really nice and clean :)
the first thing i think you should do is to take away some bobbols.. and change the font.. place the text in a better place too...
the lighting is really nice made, but the colour to the light is a bit to dark..
the fish you have used look really nice, but i think you need to make different fishes, i don't think one type good.. i had the same problem in my ussop wall lol :)
the extraction seems to be really good for me, just work with this little mistake:
i hope that helps and good luck :)
the first thing i think you should do is to take away some bobbols.. and change the font.. place the text in a better place too...
the lighting is really nice made, but the colour to the light is a bit to dark..
the fish you have used look really nice, but i think you need to make different fishes, i don't think one type good.. i had the same problem in my ussop wall lol :)
the extraction seems to be really good for me, just work with this little mistake:
i hope that helps and good luck :)
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Yes, I agree with the above comments, very good start ^^
What I would do is put more detail in the background – from my experience, just a gradient, text and scan won't do at AP. I like the light coming in from the top left, you could put some watery textures in the back, maybe? Other than that it looks lovely :3
What I would do is put more detail in the background – from my experience, just a gradient, text and scan won't do at AP. I like the light coming in from the top left, you could put some watery textures in the back, maybe? Other than that it looks lovely :3
mohanadreally nice and clean :)
the first thing i think you should do is to take away some bobbols.. and change the font.. place the text in a better place too...
the lighting is really nice made, but the colour to the light is a bit to dark..
the fish you have used look really nice, but i think you need to make different fishes, i don't think one type good.. i had the same problem in my ussop wall lol :)
the extraction seems to be really good for me, just work with this little mistake:
i hope that helps and good luck :)
Oouch! A lot of thanks, mohanad! XD I haven't seen this mistake, I will rearrange now ^^... And thank you all boys, for your coments! I will try to follow your tips ;) .
cHaLeLoAnd thank you all boys, for your coments! I will try to follow your tips ;) .
I'm not offended or anything, but... i'm a girl. ^_~ and I agree. add different types of fish that's a nice idea.
I'm not trying to accuse you of anything but...are you sure YOU made this wallpaper? Because usually wallpapers made by the company itself on the bottom of the wallpaper they would write '© 2006 Pokemon. © 1995-2006 Nintendo/Creatures Inc.' etc etc. XP Please ensure that it is your own wallpaper, and please ensure I'm not being rude or anything like that, so if it is your wallaper I'm sorry to have accused you.
But anyway, about the wallpaper now. Hmmm well it doesn't look like water YET, follow this link and it'll lead you to a Water Tutorial, follow it carefully and you'll have a nice water effect in no time! ^^ I like the light coming down though! ^^ I think you could do without that other fish pokemon in the background, and get rid of a fw bubbles too. Hmm and maybe bring down the title/text a bit too. Good luck! ^^
But anyway, about the wallpaper now. Hmmm well it doesn't look like water YET, follow this link and it'll lead you to a Water Tutorial, follow it carefully and you'll have a nice water effect in no time! ^^ I like the light coming down though! ^^ I think you could do without that other fish pokemon in the background, and get rid of a fw bubbles too. Hmm and maybe bring down the title/text a bit too. Good luck! ^^
silver-dragon-hisui
cHaLeLoAnd thank you all boys, for your coments! I will try to follow your tips ;) .
I'm not offended or anything, but... i'm a girl. ^_~ and I agree. add different types of fish that's a nice idea.
Ja ja! I'm sorry. I have said "boys refering to all the people who have posted, could be that I have done language mistakes , because I'm not english and I try to speak the best I can xD. Sorry again ;)
And returning to the wall, if I put only one kind of pokémon fish is because I have followed the role between this two pokémon species (Feebas - the specie of pokémon fish you are seeing, and Milotic, the beauty pokémon with a siren tail, the main pokémon of the wall, who is the evolved form of the Feebas specie, the ugly Feebas transforms in a beautiful pokémon: Milotic. So, if I put other kind of fishes in this wall I will break the relation between this two. I am a pokémon fan (jeje) and the other pokémon fans will understand this, too.. jeje!
Yes , and I will try to put a lake background and probably I will take away some boobles, and I'm changing the font and lighting more the light on the top left... but I don't know where to put the text, now...xD
You didn't answer mblack's question.
Can we see the original scan?
Can we see the original scan?
mblackI'm not trying to accuse you of anything but...are you sure YOU made this wallpaper? Because usually wallpapers made by the company itself on the bottom of the wallpaper they would write '© 2006 Pokemon. © 1995-2006 Nintendo/Creatures Inc.' etc etc. XP Please ensure that it is your own wallpaper, and please ensure I'm not being rude or anything like that, so if it is your wallaper I'm sorry to have accused you.
But anyway, about the wallpaper now. Hmmm well it doesn't look like water YET, follow this link and it'll lead you to a Water Tutorial, follow it carefully and you'll have a nice water effect in no time! ^^ I like the light coming down though! ^^ I think you could do without that other fish pokemon in the background, and get rid of a fw bubbles too. Hmm and maybe bring down the title/text a bit too. Good luck! ^^
U_U You have really offended my sensitivity... I don't like that people acuse me unjustly of being a lier or a deceitful... I'm sorry if the text of Nintendo can be souspicious, but I have put it following the model of other OFFICIAL wallpapers I have seen. This is UNOFFICIAL because is done by ME, and I have put it because these characters are from NINTENDO, not from ME, and they have the rights.
Anyway, thanks for the water tutorial, it will help me...
And the images are not from scans, I have token them from the official pokémon american web, from the pokédex. The pokédex is made by flash so the images can be enlarged with clicking enlarge with the right button of the mouse. I have done this to obtain larger images of good quality and I have copy the screen with the Imp Pant Pet Sis button. Then I have cut the background of the images to use them in photshop, and I have arranged some little typical imperfections of the flash.
These are the images without the original background that I have cut that I have used:
And the original ones without my arrangements are in the official website, in the pokédex:
http://www.pokemon.com
2 years 4 months ago
Lol dont worry too much about the legal stuff, btw if you want to put it, put it at the very bottom border so that when people want to make that their wallpaper, the taskbar covers all of it.
as for the wallpaper, it looks very nice, the only things that i might suggest are: there are some inconsistancies with the stroke around the bubbles the ones at the front are stroked while the ones at the back arent, perhaps you might want to ditch the stroke and try some different angles of drop shadow. for the light source i dont think you needed to go to all of that work to smudge it in such a way, instead, you can just do filter>render>lens flare, you might find that lens will give more of a realistic light. if you dont like the redness of the lense flare, you can use your lasso tool, set the feathering to about 20-30 circle up the lens flare and go to edit>adjustments>selective colours and turn that red into something else
as for the wallpaper, it looks very nice, the only things that i might suggest are: there are some inconsistancies with the stroke around the bubbles the ones at the front are stroked while the ones at the back arent, perhaps you might want to ditch the stroke and try some different angles of drop shadow. for the light source i dont think you needed to go to all of that work to smudge it in such a way, instead, you can just do filter>render>lens flare, you might find that lens will give more of a realistic light. if you dont like the redness of the lense flare, you can use your lasso tool, set the feathering to about 20-30 circle up the lens flare and go to edit>adjustments>selective colours and turn that red into something else
Yeahhh! I have tried to follow all your valious tips and I have do some changes in this wall. I hope it will be better than before. The changes I have done are: I have changed a bit the shadow of the bubbles (a bit more of shadow), I have take out some bubbles, I have correct the mistake with the stroke of Milotic, I have put the water texture on the background (thanks a lot for the tutorial, mblack!), I have added some more Feebas (with other position, that I have token them from other images), and I have light more the light on the top.
Ah, and I have replaced the text.
Ah, and I have replaced the text.
HOLY Schmoly! This wall is so pretty O___O Reminds me of zee old days...ahh, how I used to love Pokemon...xD (I still love it, I just don't watch it...I watch teh old tapes 
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ANYWAAY moving on,
Well I like ze bubbles, but the one thing I would fix is bring down the opacity on the outline of this bubble (by just a bit). Another thing I would do is make the text size just a tad bit larger so it's a bit more noticable.
BTW - If I didn't know any better, I would think this was made by the company, cause it's so darn good XD
but it's un-necessary to add that copyright stuff, so you don't have to next time.
)ANYWAAY moving on,
Well I like ze bubbles, but the one thing I would fix is bring down the opacity on the outline of this bubble (by just a bit). Another thing I would do is make the text size just a tad bit larger so it's a bit more noticable.
BTW - If I didn't know any better, I would think this was made by the company, cause it's so darn good XD
but it's un-necessary to add that copyright stuff, so you don't have to next time.
Tell me, what do you think about the change. Do you think is better quality than before? Is it already enough good for AP?
Now, here is the image I have used to add the new three Feebas in the wall:
And here the image I had done using some different brushes and other tools and that I have added at the wall to do a better lake (or sea) background (I hope...xD):
I wait your comments, and I hope I can submit this wall ^^
Now, here is the image I have used to add the new three Feebas in the wall:
And here the image I had done using some different brushes and other tools and that I have added at the wall to do a better lake (or sea) background (I hope...xD):
I wait your comments, and I hope I can submit this wall ^^