Inuyasha, my fav anime. I hope this one looks alriht. I have few resources to create walls, but I know if I keep trying, I'll get it! (someday...)

Euhm... well, what's up with the funky ass size? XD. The smallest size that AP accepts is 1024x768. Other than that, there's a LOT of extraction errors, and the bg and effects used are very very... mismatch. The white frilly stuff reminds me of winter, and the bg has like some kind of leaves... Two opposing themes XD.

Can you tone down your glow around your charachters? it looks like their butts are sitting on clouds.

I think it looks lovly.

Ok, i improved for those who gave me critique. i hope it looks better.

Hmmm...the extraction is still pretty bad...and the thingy on the corners of the wall, is it petals?i don't think you should put it there...
the fonts are kinda pixelly...try smoothing it
patience dude, do it slow and you'll get it just fine...good luck!

Okay..i think your background is a bit simple isn't it? Why don't you add other effects such as light effects or maybe add some clouds as it's bg??
And i see you forgot your sig..
The font is too big and i don't like it at all..

My comments:
-Background is too simple/absent
-Extraction is very jaggy. Check Kagome's hair and her right leg.
-Intrusive text (it's large but not too much)
-Branch needs better extraction
- Strange resolution. It will surely not be accepted. Minimum size is 1024x768 no?

I get the impression that you have used the lasso tool or a hard-brush eraser (or MS Paint :s) to do the extraction, explaining the jaggyness. You will need to work on it more.

infinityrulz

Strange resolution. It will surely not be accepted. Minimum size is 1024x768 no?

Yup... I've seen a few people disregarding this lately.

mellykill

can you tone down your glow around your charachters? it looks like their butts are sitting on clouds.

I agree, the glow is a bit overwhelming.

Not much new to say but once you hear something enough times, it gets into your head. *clears throat* read the FAQ--your size = rejection due to smallness...the leaves don't fit as a border, especially with that blue outline. get rid of them and go for more cherry blossom petals blowing in the wind. there is NO bg...not really. paint yourself some clouds. ^^ search at deviantART, a wonderful source of brushes, or just google "cloud brushes" or retouch up a stock photo of the sky. repair the branch and the scan--look at the edges and can you tell yourself they are straight and nice? no, at least not for the rest of us. so...keep all that in mind and fix up your wall! you could make it look dazzlingly beautiful if you poured lots of effort into improvements. ;D

PS>> @~infinityrulz: nothing wrong with polygonal lasso tool in extraction and i doubt it creates such edges... i used it in my kazuki makabe extraction for my "finding myself" soukyuu no fafner wall and you go check out his hair! smooth...at least i think. but agreed that erasers can become killers of extractions >_<