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Relaxation by °Tens  18 hours 19 minutes  ago

Relaxation by °Tens 18 hours 19 minutes ago

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As an animation, Bakemonogatari has a simple, clean art style. But the guest illustrations for the series are anything but simple! So, it's great to see that °Tens took on a more complex illustration and made it his own with vector gradients so fine at points it more resembles painting that vectoring. Do have a look at this beautiful wallpaper!

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~NosVII 1 minute ago
Sure ^^ I'll start tagging ;) the "Monochrome" tag isn't quite up-to-date

*moutonzare 3 minutes ago
AP needs a scans and wallpapers tagging squad :3

~NosVII 6 minutes ago

~kittylove 7 minutes ago
Nup

$virus9009 7 minutes ago
@*moutonzare now if only there was a filter for scans that are black and white or mono lol

~Lelouch-0 8 minutes ago
Sup sup to alll

~kittylove 9 minutes ago
Hey Lelouch @~Mystic: hahah then you have good taste1

$authemis 9 minutes ago
No thanks, i'd rather get a rope :)

~Roxie-Rae 10 minutes ago
Bye auth. Hello Lelouch

~Mysticmom2 10 minutes ago
Im a sucker for funky shoes though..lol.

my first wallpaper of Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle

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~Mokona-chan
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3 years 1 month ago
Konichiwa!<^_^>

Is the first time that I decide to announce one of my wallpapers in Animepaper, I hope to know if it is good the work or not?

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~Utena
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3 years 1 month ago
Composition is good but there are some things that need improvement.
I would remove the text, or make it less noticeable, since you have such a big pic on the wallpaper, a text that's so flashy makes the wallpaper look too overdone.
Also, it would look better with the pic sharper. And the parts where the pic blend with the white part of the wallpaper, could do with a softer look.

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~Mokona-chan
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3 years 1 month ago
Thank you for your comments, until moment can begin them to go up them???

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~nelleah
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3 years 1 month ago
Hm... Quite a good start, but a few things could be improved on. The text could be a bit more readable, and the brushing could be more random. Good start, though xP.

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~mimiw121503
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3 years 1 month ago

Utena
Composition is good but there are some things that need improvement.
I would remove the text, or make it less noticeable, since you have such a big pic on the wallpaper, a text that's so flashy makes the wallpaper look too overdone.
Also, it would look better with the pic sharper. And the parts where the pic blend with the white part of the wallpaper, could do with a softer look.


I agree with her but its beautiful too! Considering I can't do it..

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~lurchie
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3 years 1 month ago
Its hardly perfect, but on the whole, its nicely done!

~Imezia
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3 years 1 month ago
I think the background is beautiful but the actual picture looks very harsh and brings down the quality of your wallpaper.
-Imezia

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~Mokona-chan
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3 years 1 month ago
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS!! <^_^>

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~Yulaw
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3 years 1 month ago
Oke, here's my rant:

1) Your resolution isnt really acceptable nowadays. Although the minium requirement is 1024 x 768, I suggest you work on higher resolutions such as: 1280 x 1024 or even better 1600 x 1200. When users use a higher resolution and stretch out your wallpapers it really may look pixely and therefor ugly, we wouldnt want that! =(.
2) Your logo / text is catching more attention then the rest of the wallpaper which isnt a good thing. The characters should be the main focus of your wallpaper and the text/logo removes that focus. Toning down the colors might do the trick.
3) The brush thingies @ shaorans head and @ the right side (if you place yourself in her position) of Sakura? Is it snow? or merely an attempt to creat an effect? Whatever it may be, you really must consider removing it. The rest of the wallpapers looks really calm and soothing, the brush effect kinda disturbes that feeling... which is a pity.
4) The light on your wallpaper may be a bit overdone, although it creates a nice atmosphere, you may consider to tone it down a little bit.

I hope you dont feel offended by my words, goodluck on your wallpaper!

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~Mokona-chan
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3 years 1 month ago
Thanks to all for their comments and wait the final result that so much was worth the pain thanks to the advice that commented me, very soon and therefore we will give had concluded that post. don't get lost the upload. sayoonara <^_^>

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~Chihiro-chan
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3 years 1 month ago
I think its very cute ^-^ (I love Tsubasa)
It looks like it needs a little work done, though...
Um...I like how soft it looks, but somehow doesn't look finished.
Er...that's not very helpful >\\\<

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