Hi everybody,

I made a new wall:



I'm happy how the vector of Sakura turn out in the end (made it myself) but don't really know about the font, color, place etc. of the title. I need some opinions here. So please tell me what you think about it.

Another "problem" is the title of the wall. I first thought about calling it "Platinum" because it's from the CD of this song. But I think it doesn't match with the wall.

Any suggestions are welcome. Tell me what you think about the wall. You could be of great help ^.^

Either you vector, or you do this

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either you vector, or you do this

The wall is already vectored!

It is vectored, but the lines could be crisper, thicker, and cleaner. Great start though.

Hiya ^_^ good wallpaper so far

For the title, my suggestion is "Song of Flight" or "My Song of Flight" or "A Song of Flight"

I think your choice of font and effects for the title is very good actually (though you could try moving "Card" and "Captor" just a bit close together maybe?), it matches the wallpaper quite nicely in all respects. I would however recommend a different signature font (maybe Century Gothic or Eras Medium ITC), something a lot more simple, smaller, less dominant.

For the rest of the wallpaper, here's the stuff I can think of that might be useful:
- A lot of the lines on her wings need to be converted to curved paths, right now they show the straight paths that are there.
- I'm not sure exactly what it is, but her neck looks too small somehow...
- there are some small assailing problems on the lines on the back of her head and on the two top left stands of her hair
- I suggest doing something more with the coloring, maybe some gradients, more shades, or bushes... or you could even try to make parts of her translucent to the sky (though that might be difficult to do right, and I'm not sure how it world look...)

Anyway, I hope I was able to help some n_n
~August199

August199 took the words out of my mouth. I think you have a good base right now. I also think you need more coloring. Her closed eye lid look strange to me because there it is a mass of blackness. You may also want to reduce some of the vector work that represents the folds or shadows in her hair, clothes, and bow. Replacing them with shading might be one possible solution. You may also want to try to tone down on the black lines.

I agree with august199, the base for this wall, is great. all that needs to be straightened out in general is the curves of your vector(specifically the ends of Sakura's hair and wings, every other part looks great :3), i also agree that her neck seems too small^^;; also, there's pink outlines on a part of her wings, that i think should be black to be consistant with your other outlines which are black, the font for your main text looks nice, and the only thing i suggest for that, is to put "captor" in "card captor" as maybe one word, and altogether, "Cardcaptor Sakura" on one line :3

(very cute vector btw^^)