FMA station of the train
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Corrections of first, this this also with the filter cutout, I believe that now already traveling is watched less real than…
station of the train
station of the train
I like it... it have a good resolution.. on the bg. it's a very good work
The background is really nice, but I have one problems with ed. ed's head is surrounded by a bold black line and I think this line should be less notice-able if you want it to look like it's part of the picture.
I like it I think the BG pic looks great
Well, like darastrix said, the black outline on his head should be less noticeable... or not noticeable at all. Other than that, I think the lightings on them should be worked on more... But here's something else I think (just my opinion that is). The background looks great and all but the stock picture and the background, doesn't suit each other at all. Maybe it's the stock size or something I'm not sure. It's just that I can't see the whole thing as 'whole' yanno? x.x;
Like what darastrix and kaisen said, Ed looks like he's pop-up-ed. I don't think it's supposed to.. he's like in another dimension and yeah, something the like. I like what you did with the background though, it's like a wallpaper effect. :D maybe you should SLIGHTLY add the same effect on ed and al, but other than that, it looks really nice :D you should change ed though, it's like, he's ahead. o.o and al's left out, remove the shadow, I think that would work. =D
I like the idea of it and all, but don't use stock images for backgrounds. You should only use them when you need to sample a texture or as a vector base. Good luck with that xP
I disagree with nelleah. Use stock photos as BG only if you know how to blend the scan to it. There are many that do. *cough* me... *cough*. In this case, the filtering you did on the BG makes it look painted. Why not try to match the same effects with the scan? Be careful as you don't want to make the scan look filter-happy. And the black outline/inner glow as mentioned by others has to go...
Looks nice but also seems like you've just cut out Ed and Al and placed them over a CG image you found elsewhere. The typography is nice but large; in fact the brothers also seem too large when you take into account the size of the trees and their placement; they should be slightly smaller, lighter and lower down to look in place properly.
2 years 11 months ago
Less filter still! I like the way looks, try vectoring the background so it look kind of like the way it does now. But less choppy. You are on a good roll, keep up with it :D. I can't wait until it is done!
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