Still Trying... To-Heart Wallpaper
3 years 4 months ago
Hi... Well here is.. another attempt...
I decided to read some tutorials 'cause i had no idea of working with photoshop... and i was doing such horrible bgs... =P it was a mess...
I think this one has ended up pretty well... so... comment Please and help me improve it
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/1699/lightingpinkbyclaringsdk9.jpg
THANKS 4 READING THIS!!
ByezZzz ;)
Think this is better...
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2631/lightingpinkbyclarings2lv9.jpg
Change the title... (have a bad english :P)
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/440/lightofyourlifebyclarings2ya0.jpg[/strike]
I decided to read some tutorials 'cause i had no idea of working with photoshop... and i was doing such horrible bgs... =P it was a mess...
I think this one has ended up pretty well... so... comment Please and help me improve it
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/1699/lightingpinkbyclaringsdk9.jpg
THANKS 4 READING THIS!!
ByezZzz ;)
Think this is better...
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2631/lightingpinkbyclarings2lv9.jpg
Change the title... (have a bad english :P)
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/440/lightofyourlifebyclarings2ya0.jpg[/strike]
3 years 4 months ago
I think is nice excellent choice of colors first version better the outer glow of the second looks bad. But wait for more comments on the bg is nice.
Good luck.
Good luck.
#358927 Quote Report Edited by $darknesschild 3 years 4 months ago
Is nice combination of colors, i like it to much :D
3 years 4 months ago
darknesschildI think is nice excellent choice of colors first version better the outer glow of the second looks bad. But wait for more comments on the bg is nice.
Good luck.
Thanks... :S I have to say, i disagree... I like the second version more... But maybe i'm wrong, I'm new at this...
3 years 4 months ago
sTill waiting for more comments... Please...!! ;)
Am i ready for submition?¿?
It's a real beginner's wall. Nothing wrong with it, it's a clean picture, but keep in mind AP is looking for special and original papers, so I don't know if they will accept it. I hope some admin can help you out with that question. Wall is quite finished, I think, so gj.
3 years 4 months ago
Final version...
I make a buttefly to fill the bg a little... Hope you like it!
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/9069/lightofyourlifebyclaringsq7.jpg
Am i ready 4 submit?¿?
Comments PLEASE!!
I make a buttefly to fill the bg a little... Hope you like it!
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/9069/lightofyourlifebyclaringsq7.jpg
Am i ready 4 submit?¿?
Comments PLEASE!!
Hallo~
Two things jump out at me:
- The type. You can either pick a different font or make the text more noticable if you want it to be a focus (in that case, make it bigger and/or darker). I would go with the second because the font looks good to me~
- The butterfly wings. They're kind of random in the middle of the wall xD Why not move the picture of the girl over a bit and put the wings behind her, like they're part of her? I think it would add some interest and give the wall a theme.
Still, it's a very good start! Keep it up :3
Two things jump out at me:
- The type. You can either pick a different font or make the text more noticable if you want it to be a focus (in that case, make it bigger and/or darker). I would go with the second because the font looks good to me~
- The butterfly wings. They're kind of random in the middle of the wall xD Why not move the picture of the girl over a bit and put the wings behind her, like they're part of her? I think it would add some interest and give the wall a theme.
Still, it's a very good start! Keep it up :3
3 years 4 months ago
mumpoHallo~
Two things jump out at me:
- The type. You can either pick a different font or make the text more noticable if you want it to be a focus (in that case, make it bigger and/or darker). I would go with the second because the font looks good to me~
- The butterfly wings. They're kind of random in the middle of the wall xD Why not move the picture of the girl over a bit and put the wings behind her, like they're part of her? I think it would add some interest and give the wall a theme.
Still, it's a very good start! Keep it up :3
mmm... I made some changes... I put the wings behind her, but i'am not sure they match well...
This is the new one...
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/1020/lightofyourlifebyclarings11l8.jpg
However... I still think the version before is better... (change: only make the text more noticable)
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/9069/lightofyourlifebyclaringsy7.jpg
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/334/lightofyourlifebyclaringsr4.jpg
Comments PLEASE!!...
Try submitting and 90% u'll lost 100 points.
it's not creative enough. you just make a bg then put the scan in, that's it?
see how the other wallers make their walls.
it's not creative enough. you just make a bg then put the scan in, that's it?
see how the other wallers make their walls.
Try submitting and 90% u'll lost 100 points.
it's not creative enough. you just make a bg then put the scan in, that's it?
see how the other wallers make their walls.
it's not creative enough. you just make a bg then put the scan in, that's it?
see how the other wallers make their walls.
Lol i see you used shinto's background tutorial =P. i'm not sure if you should submit that quite just yet. like i tried wiv almost the exact same background as yours so i know =.= lol. well try adding some things that suit your theme if you have one. dunno if i'm of any help but yeh lol.
Qué puedo decir...
1) El Scan: supongo que está bien extraido, aunque de ese tema se muy poco. En cualquier caso yo lo pondría más a la derecha. Evidentemente su posición se debe a las alas, pero las alas casi que sobran :P
2) El fondo: no se como lo has hecho y como soy incapaz de hacer algo igual no puedo decirte que esté mal o que esté bien. En cualquier caso a mi el rosa como color no me gusta :P
3) El texto: bueno... has añadido un par de efectos unicamente a un texto simple... lo único que yo podría cuestionar es que no esté más trabajado.
4) Esta crítica: se mejor que nadie la canitidad de horas que se echan con cada wallpaper y que no es agradable que te vengan con una larga lista de "mal" "mal" "mal" "peor que mal"
Si vas a intentar subirlo a la pagina, que tengas suerte. Otra cosa que sienta fatal es que te lo rechacen.
Y eso es todo ^^
1) El Scan: supongo que está bien extraido, aunque de ese tema se muy poco. En cualquier caso yo lo pondría más a la derecha. Evidentemente su posición se debe a las alas, pero las alas casi que sobran :P
2) El fondo: no se como lo has hecho y como soy incapaz de hacer algo igual no puedo decirte que esté mal o que esté bien. En cualquier caso a mi el rosa como color no me gusta :P
3) El texto: bueno... has añadido un par de efectos unicamente a un texto simple... lo único que yo podría cuestionar es que no esté más trabajado.
4) Esta crítica: se mejor que nadie la canitidad de horas que se echan con cada wallpaper y que no es agradable que te vengan con una larga lista de "mal" "mal" "mal" "peor que mal"
Si vas a intentar subirlo a la pagina, que tengas suerte. Otra cosa que sienta fatal es que te lo rechacen.
Y eso es todo ^^
3 years 4 months ago
Well...
New ones...
Take a look... and help me improve it (i think the first one looks better)
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7845/lightofyourlifebyclarings1sz8.jpg (better wings)
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/3985/untitled8hf5.jpg (changed the position of the scan and the wings)
http://img487.imageshack.us/img487/9393/untitled5copyae3.jpg (changed the wings)
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/2103/untitled4copy3hz3.jpg
Well... have fun jijiji... (sorry to bother showing so many walls at the same time)
Comments PLEASE!
New ones...
Take a look... and help me improve it (i think the first one looks better)
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7845/lightofyourlifebyclarings1sz8.jpg (better wings)
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/3985/untitled8hf5.jpg (changed the position of the scan and the wings)
http://img487.imageshack.us/img487/9393/untitled5copyae3.jpg (changed the wings)
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/2103/untitled4copy3hz3.jpg
Well... have fun jijiji... (sorry to bother showing so many walls at the same time)
Comments PLEASE!
I like the design of the wall. very nice concept as well You have done a great jub thus far keep up the good work ^_^









