peacemaker wallpaper
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#372053 Quote Report Edited by ~Darkenfeathers 2 years 1 month ago
I like the simple color and all, especially of the scan, but the BG kinda seems jagged, I mean why are there gaps in the outlines of every object in the background? Besides that, its all right I suppose. Never really saw a wallpaper like this b4. Almost like a picture book scene.
Oh the outline was like that in the scan i thought it looked ok so i kepted it i guess i get rid of it then ^_^
I like the version without the lines.
Uhhmm I don't see much wrong with it actually...I really really like it...except maybe the tree is a little too sharp compared to the rest of the wall >.O
good luck!
Uhhmm I don't see much wrong with it actually...I really really like it...except maybe the tree is a little too sharp compared to the rest of the wall >.O
good luck!
• Nice work fixing the outline. Now it looks great! I don’t know I kind of like the tree as it is. It stands above the rest of the BG :) .
#372388 Quote Report Edited by ~Darkenfeathers 2 years 1 month ago
To me, the lines on the clouds and moon still look jagged. You should vector it and it'll look better.
Also, it's kinda weird to me how the Souji is so light-colored compared the bg.
Good luck!
Also, it's kinda weird to me how the Souji is so light-colored compared the bg.
Good luck!
The girl in the foreground doesnt match the BG at all! lol she looks completely stand-out-ish. if you alter her colors to more like the BG, in saturation, it would fix a lot of things!
also, the font is silly. its old and everyones seen it, and it doesnt match this wall. i think you should choose a different font and then try to blend it in a little. you shouldnt just type something on to the image.
wonderful concept :D
also, the font is silly. its old and everyones seen it, and it doesnt match this wall. i think you should choose a different font and then try to blend it in a little. you shouldnt just type something on to the image.
wonderful concept :D
My opinion can be diferent from the others but I think this wall is strange o.o
You could make the lines from the clouds and the background darker...they seem to have some fails and so as the sun...But its good I think you just need to change the lines =b
You could make the lines from the clouds and the background darker...they seem to have some fails and so as the sun...But its good I think you just need to change the lines =b
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