First Submission - Death Note
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Hello hello!
I've been here for a while, and I thought I'd finally post a wallpaper (gosh I'm lazy) >.< So I thought I'd use an L wallpaper I made~ I personally like it, but I'd still like some critique on how I can make it better (because I KNOW it could be better).
So, comments and critique would be greatly appreciated ^-^
Long Live L!
I've been here for a while, and I thought I'd finally post a wallpaper (gosh I'm lazy) >.< So I thought I'd use an L wallpaper I made~ I personally like it, but I'd still like some critique on how I can make it better (because I KNOW it could be better).
So, comments and critique would be greatly appreciated ^-^
Long Live L!
Hmmm, interesting wall =] Maybe if it actually had a noticeable border it could help it, because I'm not quite sure where it starts and where it ends xD L's hair is somewhat white at the top and a little blurry and maybe if you concentrated the colours a bit more xD? I think that would make it more appealing. ^^
I agree with crimson a real border would help also if you made what L is wearing and his hair a bit darker cause its not that bright in the anime or in the movie
I'm not sure if a border is appropriate with what you seem to be aiming for.
The first thing I'll advise is change of font. I really don't like it, and the bright red outline around the text don't really match with the washed out colours (this is the same with the blood stains in the background). I'd either adjust the colours of the picture to make (like what the others said) it a really dark goth looking wall (that would work with the blood stains), or tone down that red.
The first thing I'll advise is change of font. I really don't like it, and the bright red outline around the text don't really match with the washed out colours (this is the same with the blood stains in the background). I'd either adjust the colours of the picture to make (like what the others said) it a really dark goth looking wall (that would work with the blood stains), or tone down that red.
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