Not wise that to put to the fund of the image ... not tape-worm designs U_U...

If someone was helping myself to know that it is what I him have to add only say it to me...

Serious of great it helps

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/4690/suzuay5.jpg

Cute, but I would change the text. The whole grunge cracked thing doesn't work for such an adorable wallpaper. You might also want to add something to the background, plain white seems just too boring.

~Wolf

I stopped editing it...

The writing that is of fund is God Knows's song in Japanese...

But even I do not sit down assurance of which it is the definitive one...
Someone say to me that it is what I him have to add or that I have to take from him... =S

http://img398.imageshack.us/my.php?image=suzugn2.jpg

The scan is too jagged and not well extracted... I don't really like the background, try to make it more like a teather, with curtains, reflectors and stuff... that's be so cool ^^

They can say to me that him I can more add... the curtains do not have left very well that we say...

I'm bad in this ^^U

http://img165.imageshack.us/my.php?image=suzu2jc9.jpg

What program are you using? You could make cute vectored curtains a la Hello Kitty using the pen tool. And reflectors.
Also, there's artifacting, but that must be due to wrong saving settings, so make sure you check that first for the next version.
I had another idea: you can move up the whole thing so you can draw heads... like the crowd watching them, and maybe some of them raising their arms and whatnot.

I'm not sure if what I'm seeing are artifacts, or if your scan is in low quality. If it's the latter, you need to clean up your scan. I agree with the others, a nice theather background would work best. If you are having a hard time creating the curtains and such, you can find a scan of curtains and vector them.

Great idea about the bg but i think you can do better.. the scan is really cute but everything needs more work, i think, coz im still a novice with this.. you better wait for more suggestions from pro's..

I use the Photoshop and know few tricks for bottoms and with the curtains if work costs to me to do them from this program xP

for that reason I say that I am new in wallpapers xP

Oh the characthers are very cute, and about the bg is really empty, maybe you can add curtain on the left and right side (like a theater one), and also try to clean the image again :d And like someone said you can use photoshop program to vector the curtains (try using pen tools for vectoring :D)

Hope tat help you

Good luck

OK, let’s work on these. The first thing I want to say is…they’re so CUTE ^_^ Well, now that’s out of the way. The three different versions you posted, scrap the second one with the text on the BG. It might look better without the text in the sky but I still don’t think the chibi characters suit the look =/

Like the other people, I think that you can do better on the BG. Vectoring curtains into the backdrop sounds like a good idea and if you don’t think you have the skills to vector a set from scratch, find an existing scan and vector that. If you don’t know how to re-vector a scan…well, I suggest you look at some tutorials and learn how. Re-vectoring is usually a required basic skill when it comes to walling and if you want to continue, it really does pay off to learn how to do it. Alternatively, I suppose the last wall with the stage-like setting is alright. It makes it seem like they’re performing and it suits the characters.

On that note, assuming that you don’t want to vector in some curtains on the BG, I’ll give some suggestions about the last wall. The BG is a bright circle with a dark back. To me, that’s a spotlight. Now, if it is a spotlight, then the shadows are all wrong. Their shadows should be projected onto the wall behind them, not the floor underneath. The sign at the top. Very nice idea but is it hanging on only one rope? o_O If so, it needs to be tilted way more. Either that or add another rope to the other side but make it longer than the left. This is probably a pretty pointless suggestion since if you’re unwilling to vector in curtains, you’re not likely going to want to do this but you might want to consider adding some other things to the BG. Since they are performing on guitars, how about a set of speakers? XD Something that would make it look more concert-y.

Hope I’ve helped and good luck =P

Thanks for its commentaries...

I as soon as to be used the Photoshop and of ahi I am creating the cosas(por example the curtains that I was removing from this image http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/3262/cortinassw0.jpg ) but at the moment that I do them, I they do not have left, them lack something but realistic but I do not have idea of since it can do it... in the shade I realized after to have kept the document but also I have it kept in format PSD that is the one of the Photoshop and asi I can modify it without having to return to extract the image of girls(I show the image of where I extracted them http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/3561/1154896973517gg4.jpg ) it wanted to know if somebody has a tutorial to make the curtains and that the things are more realistic than treatment to do ^^U