First tryout
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I submitted my first wall a day ago and have been rejected. Now I need some advices to know how I can improve my work.
link: http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8201/dothackgubackgroundyi4.jpg
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link: http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8201/dothackgubackgroundyi4.jpg
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The top scan needs some work. It just doesn't look very good. The back scan, from what I can tell looks nice, maybe that could be your focus. And I don't really like the grainy look on the right. (personal preferance).
Don't mean to sound harsh. Good luck though! ^_^
Don't mean to sound harsh. Good luck though! ^_^
The back scan is good. But the text and top scan, you need to fix it. And yeah agree with smexypander, I dont really like also the grainy things on the right. Hmm and if you want a better result, maybe you can try using a texture on it ( that's my opinion).
Good Luck~
Good Luck~
Thanks to both of you for helping. I'll try to change the right part and to had some texture.
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