D.N Angel
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First of all, Daisuke and the cherry tree are much, MUCH too bright for the night setting you've created, particularly since the moon is behind them. It would make much more sense for them to be a little bright along the edges and darker toward the middle - the complete opposite of what you've done.
Secondly, the moon's "edge" is very very jagged, as are some of the brushes you used to make stars. Looks like you used SQUARE brushes. I think it would be better to use soft, round brushes. Also, there are way, wAY too many stars. The wall looks cluttered, specially since they're all the same brightness. Look up at the night sky. It doesn't look that bright even on the clearest of days.
I don't really like the Riku in the upper right corner of the sky, but if you must put her there, at least don't make her arms look so... cut off. Her hair is also a little poorly extracted.
But other than those, the wallpaper has a nice feeling to it. It just needs some technical fixes...
Secondly, the moon's "edge" is very very jagged, as are some of the brushes you used to make stars. Looks like you used SQUARE brushes. I think it would be better to use soft, round brushes. Also, there are way, wAY too many stars. The wall looks cluttered, specially since they're all the same brightness. Look up at the night sky. It doesn't look that bright even on the clearest of days.
I don't really like the Riku in the upper right corner of the sky, but if you must put her there, at least don't make her arms look so... cut off. Her hair is also a little poorly extracted.
But other than those, the wallpaper has a nice feeling to it. It just needs some technical fixes...
Well for me I would prefer that Daisuke put on the middle other than on the left side, you need to clean again the moon, since the extraction is not really good, and one more don't put too much stars on the bg, it seem too crowded.
Good Luck :D
Good Luck :D
Yaay thanks for the coments!! i already downloaded 3 brushes of moons, so i changed ^_^
i'm with a doubt to put or not Riku in the wallpaper..... what do you guys think?
Oh!yeah, I'll remake my night sky...it'll be better with smallest stars,i agree with that u_u
and Daisuki will be less brighter too!
THANKS FOR THE COMENTS!!
i'm with a doubt to put or not Riku in the wallpaper..... what do you guys think?
Oh!yeah, I'll remake my night sky...it'll be better with smallest stars,i agree with that u_u
and Daisuki will be less brighter too!
THANKS FOR THE COMENTS!!
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