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My wall was rejected!!
Man,i have spent a whole day to make this.And it was rejected.I want to have some advice about how make it better,so it won't be rejected the next time I submit it...>_<.Here is the link:
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/5153/archerthelonewolf7tk.jpg
I think I have to stop working on the second wall for now,and come back to this....
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/5153/archerthelonewolf7tk.jpg
I think I have to stop working on the second wall for now,and come back to this....
"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
Okay...
The primary problem is the blurriness, TEXT TOO BLURRY, heck, THE WHOLE CHARACTER IS BLURRY. Try making it less blurry and post it back here again for more advices.
Hope this helps...
The primary problem is the blurriness, TEXT TOO BLURRY, heck, THE WHOLE CHARACTER IS BLURRY. Try making it less blurry and post it back here again for more advices.
Hope this helps...
MooMooCow1314 the lolicon and moe freak has claimed Miyazaki Nodoka OFFICIALLY
This should have really been part of your original topic but I'll answer anyway...
One of the main reasons why I think it would have been rejected is because the whole wallpaper looks really blurry for some reason, kinda like you've made it bigger. That is definatly something that you should look into sorting out. It kinda looks like the wall maybe blurry to hide the fact that the image of Archer isn't that greater quailty although I could be wrong. The quailty of the image of Archer does need to be looked at as well, you can find a tutorial on how to fix it up here: Cleaning an image.
This might just be me but I'm not really a fan of the fact that the main image has been put inbetween those big black borders. It would look alot cooler without them and if they grey swooshy-ness carried on over the whole wall. If you do decide to get rid of them though I think it might be a good idea to lighten the grey a bit and maybe try to add some scenery in the background maybe some destroyed buildings or something. It would help make the wallpaper look alot more interesting and would get rid of those wierd black lines.
That's all I'm gonna suggest but if you need more inut maybe you should PM the mod that rejected the wallpaper and ask them for an explanation. Good luck!
One of the main reasons why I think it would have been rejected is because the whole wallpaper looks really blurry for some reason, kinda like you've made it bigger. That is definatly something that you should look into sorting out. It kinda looks like the wall maybe blurry to hide the fact that the image of Archer isn't that greater quailty although I could be wrong. The quailty of the image of Archer does need to be looked at as well, you can find a tutorial on how to fix it up here: Cleaning an image.
This might just be me but I'm not really a fan of the fact that the main image has been put inbetween those big black borders. It would look alot cooler without them and if they grey swooshy-ness carried on over the whole wall. If you do decide to get rid of them though I think it might be a good idea to lighten the grey a bit and maybe try to add some scenery in the background maybe some destroyed buildings or something. It would help make the wallpaper look alot more interesting and would get rid of those wierd black lines.
That's all I'm gonna suggest but if you need more inut maybe you should PM the mod that rejected the wallpaper and ask them for an explanation. Good luck!
Actually I didn't resize anything,I just tried to blurr them a bit,guess I overdid it...+_+.
How about if I keep it like this:
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/6711/stupidproject2text2jq.jpg
this is my previous ver before I overdid things,the text is a bit different..
I think I should add something into the storm after all.
How about if I keep it like this:
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/6711/stupidproject2text2jq.jpg
this is my previous ver before I overdid things,the text is a bit different..
I think I should add something into the storm after all.
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"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
Well, like what Cessa said, you SHOULD remove the black borders. If you need a scenery, i suggest making a snowy scenery. Since the, uh, storm-like stuffs you put looks perfect for a blizzard scene, why don't you try? Of course, its all up to you, but i'd like it better if the borders were gone.
Well, best of luck. ^^
(I shalt edit)
Well, it;s still blurry...especially the text above.
Okay, if you really intend on doing a stormy-like scene, try revealing more of Archer's head. That way, it'll look nicer. And do try to make the whole thing look less blurrer...
And you don't really need to rush, there's no forcing you to submit a wallpaper.
Good luck
Well, best of luck. ^^
(I shalt edit)
Well, it;s still blurry...especially the text above.
Okay, if you really intend on doing a stormy-like scene, try revealing more of Archer's head. That way, it'll look nicer. And do try to make the whole thing look less blurrer...
And you don't really need to rush, there's no forcing you to submit a wallpaper.
Good luck
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MooMooCow1314 the lolicon and moe freak has claimed Miyazaki Nodoka OFFICIALLY
While redoing this wall.I suddenly has an idea in my head,so I tried it right before it vanish.And here is the result:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1568/largeunlimitedbladework7hi.jpg
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/9663/largeunlimitedbladework2el.jpg
I know that it wasn't good enough,but I just want to see whether if this is a good concept or not.
Have fun commenting this,while I redo the my first wall ^^
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1568/largeunlimitedbladework7hi.jpg
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/9663/largeunlimitedbladework2el.jpg
I know that it wasn't good enough,but I just want to see whether if this is a good concept or not.
Have fun commenting this,while I redo the my first wall ^^
"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
Oh I love your idea but the sun looks fake maybe you can fix it, and the ground looks blur.
Good Luck
Good Luck
I don't know how to fix the fake sun,though...could you give me a hint?.And about my first wall,I don't think I can live up to you guys expectation,sorry >_>.But I have done what I can:
Lonewolf ver 1: http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/116/stupidproject9sz.jpg
Lonewolf ver 2: http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/3677/stupidproject38lq.jpg
Lonewolf ver 1: http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/116/stupidproject9sz.jpg
Lonewolf ver 2: http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/3677/stupidproject38lq.jpg
"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
For a blizzard scene:
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallpapers/Fate-Stay-Night/item32684/
Try to learn from that wall.
Back to you, okay, since you have TWO now (omg...) i'll call the Lone Wolf wall no.1 and the other wall no.2
No. 1: Well, nice, but, the text ain't really that good (kinda pixelated...) as for the scenery, looks better, but remember to put your credits on the lower right. Need more stuffs in the wall, the borders seem to have taken a lot of space...at this rate, the background can be classified as "not stuffy enough".
No. 2: GROUND LOOKS BLURRY!! Did you Smart Blur the ground? If so, that'll make it a sure-reject. Try fixing that spot. As for the sun, yeah, need some fixing...maybe (just MAYBE) add some radiance around the sun? Archer looks...non-colored, the only way to fix that, i think, is to extract an Archer scan that is colored...if not, you'll have a non-color like character with a colorful background...
Hope this helps ^^
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallpapers/Fate-Stay-Night/item32684/
Try to learn from that wall.
Back to you, okay, since you have TWO now (omg...) i'll call the Lone Wolf wall no.1 and the other wall no.2
No. 1: Well, nice, but, the text ain't really that good (kinda pixelated...) as for the scenery, looks better, but remember to put your credits on the lower right. Need more stuffs in the wall, the borders seem to have taken a lot of space...at this rate, the background can be classified as "not stuffy enough".
No. 2: GROUND LOOKS BLURRY!! Did you Smart Blur the ground? If so, that'll make it a sure-reject. Try fixing that spot. As for the sun, yeah, need some fixing...maybe (just MAYBE) add some radiance around the sun? Archer looks...non-colored, the only way to fix that, i think, is to extract an Archer scan that is colored...if not, you'll have a non-color like character with a colorful background...
Hope this helps ^^
MooMooCow1314 the lolicon and moe freak has claimed Miyazaki Nodoka OFFICIALLY
Woa,the new ver of Lone Wolf is now finished.This time I changed everything...cause the previous scan of Archer was colorless,so it is hard to blend him into the colorful bg.So i used new materials and the previous materials..I think I will save them for later.
Lone Wolf newest ver:
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/3255/stupidproject41os.jpg
And the other one.I call it: The Sky of UBW.I try to make it less blurr on the ground but temporarily failed..>_>.So I guess I will try to fix the Sun first.Wonder if this time,the sun is better?
The Sky of UBW newest ver:
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/448/largeunlimitedbladework5wq.jpg
And by the ways,thanks Moo Moo for give me an example about how to make blizzard,it really helps me a lot.
Lone Wolf newest ver:
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/3255/stupidproject41os.jpg
And the other one.I call it: The Sky of UBW.I try to make it less blurr on the ground but temporarily failed..>_>.So I guess I will try to fix the Sun first.Wonder if this time,the sun is better?
The Sky of UBW newest ver:
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/448/largeunlimitedbladework5wq.jpg
And by the ways,thanks Moo Moo for give me an example about how to make blizzard,it really helps me a lot.
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"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
Ah...you've found the right scan. The bg now looks better too! But...
The extraction, it seems like the outline of archer..is untidy. I'd suggest you extract better or vector the outline (i don;t really know how...wait for some experts to come in to teach you about vectoring ^^).
Well, hope this advice helps. And i really hope your wall will get accepted once it finishes.
The extraction, it seems like the outline of archer..is untidy. I'd suggest you extract better or vector the outline (i don;t really know how...wait for some experts to come in to teach you about vectoring ^^).
Well, hope this advice helps. And i really hope your wall will get accepted once it finishes.
MooMooCow1314 the lolicon and moe freak has claimed Miyazaki Nodoka OFFICIALLY
Now I have finished the Lone Wolf wall.I did tried hard to make the extract better,though the result is quite not like I want.I have got rid of the two annoying noobs(may be this is what they are called).>_>.Is this okay if I submit it?
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/3749/stupidproject4v20oz.jpg
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/3749/stupidproject4v20oz.jpg
"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
Hmmm... can you extract archer better? and i am confused here. @.@ what would you like to express in the wall? is it a fire there at the left side? but there are white lights scattered at the right and also at the left that looks like snow, you can make it a snow effect overall or an all fire effect for archer since that would suit his aura in that scan.^^ and the border, i personally dont like it, can you make it that it won't have a border because i think it would look nicer, i like the font. its ok pal, just be patient, i might be wrong but i hope this helps.^^ i really like archer so i would like to see it accepted here.^^
(^O^)V
-Jane
(^O^)V
-Jane
C.O.M.P.L.I.C.A.T.E.D
So basically,everything is fine,except my terrible extraction skill,right?So the only thing I have to fix in this wall is my extraction.
"Once you have a hope without fear,nothing exists to keep you away from it"
Yup, the extraction. Like i said, try vectoring Archer.
Try to get some tips for vectoring Here
Hope this helps n__n
Try to get some tips for vectoring Here
Hope this helps n__n
MooMooCow1314 the lolicon and moe freak has claimed Miyazaki Nodoka OFFICIALLY