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What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty  3 weeks 18 hours  ago

What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty 3 weeks 18 hours ago

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Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!

ShoutBox

°soft-meanie 7 minutes ago
*bangs head into monitor*

°Anime-Girl 8 minutes ago
:3

°soft-meanie 10 minutes ago
Noo...please stop whispering >_>

$damoser 12 minutes ago
go to sleep

°soft-meanie 16 minutes ago
*gets coffee*

±angel-voice 18 minutes ago
LOL *gives a pillow*

°soft-meanie 20 minutes ago
It feels like everyone is whispering to me: GO TO SLEEP

±angel-voice 21 minutes ago
Yeah ^^ It's 3:26pm here

°soft-meanie 22 minutes ago
Internet...it's common

~Saberfang321 30 minutes ago
Oh wow, its 8:16AM here...does alot of people on here live in different countries??

FMA wallpaper

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~Eddy04
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1 year 7 months ago
This is a simple wallpaper...(I think I like simple wallpapers)
I was checking back the anime and while I watched the movie this idea came to my head...In which Edward is shown leaving..
Critics please...
And any changes...

Wow...I almost forgot the wall...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v673/eddy04/Edwards_goodbye3.jpg

I actually got a more serious in signatures...Because I use to type in a big and extravagant signature but now it is much more simple and professional I guess.

Well just in case..what I did is create the whole background and vector Edward which was way messed up..since it came directly from a manga I think you could see the canvas type texture on the drawing.....So I think it looks much better.
(Have in mind that I am just starting to learn to use PS)

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~My-Shia-San
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1 year 7 months ago
It looks good! I like how you did the background. One thing though is that the white text in the top left corner looks misplaced, or weird or something. Since you already have it on the bottom right, maybe you should erase it or something. Everything else looks bueno!!

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~Eddy04
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1 year 7 months ago
Jajaja Gracias...I'll take it away...I thought it needed some text...The one at the bottom is just for signature but I'll take it away though...wait I would like to see some more comments about the upper text so see if I take it away or not..XD

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~Saioul
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1 year 7 months ago


in my oppinion the text on teh top is just fine teh only thing i think you should do with it is give it a slight arc. i also think you should maybe add some leaves blowing around to make teh wall a little more detailed. also please comment on my walls.

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~Eddy04
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1 year 7 months ago

Saioul



in my oppinion the text on teh top is just fine teh only thing i think you should do with it is give it a slight arc. i also think you should maybe add some leaves blowing around to make teh wall a little more detailed. also please comment on my walls.



Lol...mmmm well got to find your walls so I can comment...BTW... what do you mean by arc? Could you explain?
I'll try the leafs stuff...mmm

Oh yeah...bTW what would be better big leafs or little small ones?

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~Eddy04
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1 year 7 months ago
I just went along and did some changes...

*UPDATES
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v673/eddy04/Edwards_goodbye5copy.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v673/eddy04/Edwards_goodbye6copy.jpg
Both are the same just that one has the Text and the other one well..It don't.

I still not sure if should take it off or not... I hope I can submit this one to the Gallery...and wont be rejected so..Please give me all the advises needed..

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~yuriarrow2
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1 year 7 months ago
If you speak Spanish, I do not say it by “thanks” that you wrote (for my serious much more easy one if outside thus).

1. in my opinion, the leaves that fall of you hoist them do not agree at all with the type of tree that is behind ED. Aside from which they are seen very stiff.

2. The bottom color I am not bad, likes.

3. that font I do not put, do not see myself to him well, change another type… would like to see the advance…

good luck!

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~Eddy04
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1 year 7 months ago
Would someone provide me with some brush or image of that tree's leaf? jaja...
mmmm Those were the only distinctive leafs...^^
I'll make changes...SO WHAT YOU are saying is that I should change the text instead of taking it off the Image?

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~Dapooh
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1 year 7 months ago
This wallpaper is so good! the background mixed with Edward Elric is nice. The only thing that I think is some weird is the text in the top left corner, may another type of letter could be used... or making effects in photoshop with text....
I am not a fan of FMA but the wallpaper is good,
good job but fix it some!!
byes

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`clarings
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Lips look so sweet, like cotton candy..
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1 year 7 months ago
Hi there..
First of all... the wallpaper's size is not gathering the requirements for AP gallery.. so go and check the FAQ on the wallpaper section to see the accepted sizes...
So i'm sorry to say this.. but you need to start the hole thing again.. cause if you resize this.. it would look blurry and with less quality...
Also there are a few things to change...
This looks better.. textless.. cause you have not so many empty space to place it..
The leaves are not matching, mainly because of the trees that you have added there... i would go for another knid of trees..
And i'm not a fan of the lense flair (don't know if i wrote it well)... i think that it could look better if you make your own rays of light...
goodluck!

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~Eddy04
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1 year 7 months ago
O.k. I think that i did keep the requirements on mind so...I did it with a 1024*768 pixel which has the specific amount of kb need...I am not sure why when is seen in site it has an 800*600 I got to check that..I am going to mess with PS to see how I can create my own light rays...and should I change the tree or I could more easily change the leafs...I could create different leafs instead of using the pre-mades one...What do you think change the leafs or the tree?

*Edit
O.k. Now I found the reason why the size and specification are weird...For some reason my image host changes the size so..it looks like a 800*600 but it's actually a 1024*768 with the correct amount of kb needed.. But thanks for the advise now I know that my image host is not good with that part.

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~sacredsky
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1 year 7 months ago
Hmmm...I like your idea so far, but there are a few things you should consider. First, your wallpaper looks much better without text. The lens flare is way too bright, you should tone it down a bit, and if the lens flare is acting as the "sun" of your wallpaper, Ed will need to be flipped horizontally so the lighting is correct. The leaves look way too patterned and uniform, you need to make some of them clump together, make it look random. Other than that, looks good, keep it up :)

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~Eddy04
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1 year 7 months ago

sacredsky

Hmmm...I like your idea so far, but there are a few things you should consider. First, your wallpaper looks much better without text. The lens flare is way too bright, you should tone it down a bit, and if the lens flare is acting as the "sun" of your wallpaper, Ed will need to be flipped horizontally so the lighting is correct. The leaves look way too patterned and uniform, you need to make some of them clump together, make it look random. Other than that, looks good, keep it up :)



Thx for advise in some way you are right, but then the shade that I added to him wouldn't make sense, I did it like that because the sun was to that side you can see..that the area in which the sun's light can't get are darker for example the hair and parts of face. Anyway I'll check about that just in case...I am trying to use a different type of flowers..and btw I think I might try to do my own sun rays..since everyone says it's too cheap...

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~DjAlam
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1 year 7 months ago
PIcture is gone

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~Eddy04
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1 year 6 months ago
I am tired that Animepaper rejects my work...XD
I follow every step of their requierments and it makes no sense...What the heck I must do for them to add my wallpapers? oh btw I didnt find or could make another type of leaves...I am still working on it.

BTW link fixed...Now you can see the wallpaper.

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