I am a hushed girl who screams loud with her pictures
I wonder how I became like that
I hear shrieks of pain and ravishnous of joy
I see enchanting people on a piece of paper
I want to be with them in the drawing
I am a hushed girl who screams loud with her pictures

I imagine angels decsending from the heavens
I feel the smoothness of the white paper
I touch those who see my art with amazment
I worry I'll refrian from my art as grow with more interests
I cry inside when I see others with more beautiful and inspiring art
I am a hushed girl who screams loud with her art

I understand that I am a quiet girl, so.....
I say "Talk aloud with art or how ever you want"
I dream my art will be seen by the world and be amzed
I try hard to make my art feel free and inspiring in my own way
I hope I will make my art so that it can change the world
I am hushed girl who screams loud with her pictures

I am hushed girl who screams loud with her pictures
nice poem! so deeply meaning...
makes me cry silently >_< hehe..
is it really made by u??

swissberry

I am hushed girl who screams loud with her pictures
nice poem! so deeply meaning...
makes me cry silently >_< hehe..
is it really made by u??

ya...it was homework....i had to make a poem about my self...

I admire person who can make poems.
And your poem sure is great ^^
I can't make poems, but I like it.

At least there is someone with more talent at something then me

my poems suck horribly, and i too had to do it for an assignment...got a C for effort.

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I think that it was a really great and well writen poem.

Well, as a poem it tells more than it shows. Usually it's better in poems to show what you're trying to portray rather than just saying "this is how it is." Like, you talk about "enchanting people" but I can't picture them at all because there's no description. It needs more description, and a focus to center around.

Hi, sakuradragon!

You should check out the group called "Writer's Block". We specialize in poetry and writing, and love to talk about poems and things like this. Check it out and see what you think!
As far as appreciating the poem goes, it's good prose. I can't take issue with the foot or the wording, except to say that the focus of the peotry is clearly you, and that it's a great window into who you are and how you see the world.
As far as "notes" go, if you want a proofread, there are a few spelling issues, and the word "ravishnous" is not a word. Maybe ravishings? That's not a word, either, but it's the plural of a word. (^.^) Just some English grad suggestions.

Regards, Aaron

Ok ok, this is what I imagined while reading this poem. First off your that hushed girl, and the pictures are the wallpapers on this site. The pictures are the wallpapers and for everyone to see them you gotta put it up on animepaper. And when you see other ppls wallpaper and think they're better than yours you kinda go crazy. Well, that's what I imagined while reading. If that's wrong then no need to correct me cause I just suck at translating literature. The poem was pretty good even though I may not have gotten the point.

It's a lovely poem >_< we're doing poetry in lit. class and i wish i could write poetry like that.