I'm planning to submit this one but before doing it I need your opinion first...

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/2316/pmkjl6.jpg

Hi there...
i don't think everything matches in here...
first i don't like that text on the door... too big... maybe you can change the text style too.. and use a scary kind... like a horror text...
the blood seems like floating there... (like the text)... I think i should be stick to the wall... and maybe blurry a bit the blood... cause now the stains are too perfect...
about the ground... i not sure what could fit good there... but maybe right now it's too realistic...
hope this helps...
kisses!
btw... i'm making a wall too, maybe you can give me your opinion http://www.animepaper.net/forums/Session-Zero/43223/2/

I agree with her you should make the blood looked stained on the door and walls and I dont think the stock and him blend in very well

I feel that the character is too bright. try to get it in 3d or make it plain. it looks better either way. if you try to make it plain, it may not suit the floor, anyhow, gie it a try.

Hmm a scan just slapped on top of a photo doesnt look to good ass well as random blood splattering and wierd added letters. and nothing matches right