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Um... I Think the Background ddnt suit at all, destroy gundam at the back of a happy stellar umm... maybe in my opinion it ddnt suit that well
Ummm...o_o please excuse me if i starting sounding mean from here on. ^^;
well, why are the edges on stellar so...rugged? and her feet and legs look just weird. o.o i'm sorry, but the rugged edges just look bad.
and stellar's name can use a better font. if you don't have many, go to dafont.com and search. it has lots of awesome fonts. ^^
the logo isn't really necessary.
you need a signature to identify this work as yours.
and the bg isn't quite...*searches for a word* right? i mean i thought it was an eye and then i noticed it was the destroy gundam. and happy stellar doesn't go with destroy. happy stellar goes better with scenic/abstract backgrounds. even if you decide to keep the gundam and the rest, the smoke and sky need much work in order for them to look better.
again i apologize for sounding harsh and i know you gave it effort, but the road of learning isn't without falls and this will go towards building your own standard of what is a good wallpaper... good luck!
well, why are the edges on stellar so...rugged? and her feet and legs look just weird. o.o i'm sorry, but the rugged edges just look bad.
and stellar's name can use a better font. if you don't have many, go to dafont.com and search. it has lots of awesome fonts. ^^
the logo isn't really necessary.
you need a signature to identify this work as yours.
and the bg isn't quite...*searches for a word* right? i mean i thought it was an eye and then i noticed it was the destroy gundam. and happy stellar doesn't go with destroy. happy stellar goes better with scenic/abstract backgrounds. even if you decide to keep the gundam and the rest, the smoke and sky need much work in order for them to look better.
again i apologize for sounding harsh and i know you gave it effort, but the road of learning isn't without falls and this will go towards building your own standard of what is a good wallpaper... good luck!
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