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December when there is no angel
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The walls are basically the same except for the characters.
One wall per thread.
One wall per thread.
Normally, i'd agree with sharpshot and say one wall per thread but really, because you have the same idea, i doubt it'd be useful to have five separate threads...and i doubt it's a good idea to try to submit all five. normally one concept only gets used at most three times...and the example i am thinking of has really different effects/bgs and all look awesomeXfantasticXfull of details. i don't recommend recycling a wallpaper design--not unless you get requested by lots of people to do so.
you have some minor extraction issues with a couple of these where there are white stuff outside of their outlines. the maho one was what brought it first to my attention
try avoid using the texturizer filter please! textures are good but don't feed it through the default texturizer. it comes out looking really weird, almost always.
the monochromatic idea with the bg pic is good, but it doesn't have to pull almost the entire bg into that theme with it. becaues currently, the bg looks bland. and the font choice could be better too. i recognize that font, but it's not exactly and artistic font. try experiment with other fonts and if you don't have many, go to dafont.com and download some.
you also need a sig to identify yourself as the waller behind the walls. no sig = instant rejection.
these walls have some way to go before they are up to AP scratch, but keep on working and pick your top fav to continue working on. the scans are nice so do them the justice and create other designs for them! sorry if i've sounded harsh at any point throughout this critique and don't give up walling. =)
you have some minor extraction issues with a couple of these where there are white stuff outside of their outlines. the maho one was what brought it first to my attention
try avoid using the texturizer filter please! textures are good but don't feed it through the default texturizer. it comes out looking really weird, almost always.
the monochromatic idea with the bg pic is good, but it doesn't have to pull almost the entire bg into that theme with it. becaues currently, the bg looks bland. and the font choice could be better too. i recognize that font, but it's not exactly and artistic font. try experiment with other fonts and if you don't have many, go to dafont.com and download some.
you also need a sig to identify yourself as the waller behind the walls. no sig = instant rejection.
these walls have some way to go before they are up to AP scratch, but keep on working and pick your top fav to continue working on. the scans are nice so do them the justice and create other designs for them! sorry if i've sounded harsh at any point throughout this critique and don't give up walling. =)
LOL...wow they're like...all the same. almost. XXDD
The concept is nice, but if you could work on the extraction of a couple of them around the hair, it'd be good...and similarly, the texture in the background is interesting, but it's sort of iffy...I'm not quite sure it adds much to the wall. Right now, it's sort of lacking the spice and awesomeness you could definitely put in here. It looks really bland right now. So yeah, just add some more colors and whatnot.
The concept is nice, but if you could work on the extraction of a couple of them around the hair, it'd be good...and similarly, the texture in the background is interesting, but it's sort of iffy...I'm not quite sure it adds much to the wall. Right now, it's sort of lacking the spice and awesomeness you could definitely put in here. It looks really bland right now. So yeah, just add some more colors and whatnot.
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