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Rurouni Kenshin
Wts up everyone...
so, I've made this paper, and I Would really like if you give me some advices..
here is it:
Cya...
so, I've made this paper, and I Would really like if you give me some advices..
here is it:
Cya...
O.O is amazing, i really like your wall, the BG is perfect with the image of kenshin ^^ is very good, and the efect in the image of kenshin is good
=DDDDDDD
What about whats written?
and the Font?
What about whats written?
and the Font?
I think the text is good. I think you should add some fire lighting to kenshin since its a fire background like this wall shadowblitz made karas wall.
Hummm... i didnt like this fire light of this wall you showed...
but adding some fire in front of him, would be ok...
thanks for advice =D
anyone else?
but adding some fire in front of him, would be ok...
thanks for advice =D
anyone else?
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Meeeee XDDD
Really nice, I liked it too!
I just didn't like the effect around Kenshin... in my opinion without it the wall would be better XDDD
See yaa
Really nice, I liked it too!
I just didn't like the effect around Kenshin... in my opinion without it the wall would be better XDDD
See yaa
I see some white spots in kenshin's hair. Also the lighting on your character does not reflect his fiery surroundings. Like there's fire all around him and he looks as if in moonlight.
I love the background and text. But some type of effect needs to be applied to the stock to make it blend in with the background. Maybe like an overlay layer on top of the regular render with blur/some filter settings on it or something to that extent. The problem is the stock is sticking out too much. Find a way to mix them perfectly and we might have a winner.
Following the advices:
hope you Like it =D
hope you Like it =D
So, is it ready to be submited?
if a pro guy aprove will be great =D
if a pro guy aprove will be great =D
Very nice wall, except I don't know what the little blurry things are on Kenshin. Well, if those are intended textures... then I understand. I really like the pose of Kenshin too... I think that's the main highlight of the wall. You might want to revise the BG though... looks somewhat awkward. Keep up the good work.
I see some major extraction problems on the character. I also dont like how its a very 2d looking picture placed on stock image. The Stock image is way too.. BLEH its boring and low quality and washed out. I dont like it very much but thats just me. IT seems like its off to a good start so keep on working on it :) DONT FORGET YOUR SIGNATURE!!
GJ and GL!
~Slaka
GJ and GL!
~Slaka
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Your scan and bg really connects to each other..maybe changing the font..
