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What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty  3 weeks 22 hours  ago

What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty 3 weeks 22 hours ago

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Not too much for me to say about this wallpaper that hasn't already been said: Dalarty has provided a descriptive walk through all the way from the concept idea, to its execution and ultimately its fruition. And you can really see how that careful planning paid off. But it just goes to show, good ideas take time---and a whole lot of patience!

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~uufhd 23 minutes ago
Kiiiiii....LLL

~YunChul 1 hour 8 minutes ago
Hi all

~TheFlameAlchemist 1 hour 34 minutes ago
Something happened and I just don't want to be on much anymore ^^"

~lildevil8200 1 hour 37 minutes ago
Thank you ^_^

~AmanoJ 1 hour 37 minutes ago
I'm off, time to make some dinner. Cute cat & dog btw! :D

~lildevil8200 1 hour 41 minutes ago
Lol >.<

~AmanoJ 1 hour 44 minutes ago
Yes, also i have an itch sometimes.

~lildevil8200 1 hour 45 minutes ago
Not you...

~AmanoJ 1 hour 46 minutes ago
If you must know; it was itching :P

~lildevil8200 1 hour 47 minutes ago
But why?

The Rivival of a Wallpaper ( Naruto-Sasuke)

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~LinkSoul
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Topics: 9
Posts: 33
1 year 9 months ago
Well this wallpaper has been rejected twice so please tell me whats wrong with it.
Check it out :
Naruto_Sasuke

Please leave your comment and help me out!

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~myangelnoli
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1 year 9 months ago
Ok, here I go...

First, I noticed that there are disturbing effects with the characters, like the fire with naruto and the cold "something" effect of sasuke. Those two, sorry but I can't really appreciate it, it needs improvement to make it more realistic. That those fire or ice aura (as what I see it) with the characters need to look as if it's part of the characters. Second, is the lighting effect (or is it energy, I'm not sure) with sasuke, it would look better if there are things like that with the bg so that the characters and the bg connect, same with the fire effect with naruto. I do think that the bg is a bit blank, the left side (naruto's side) needs an addition, you can use brushes there. Is it a moon I see at the back of the characters? Its not that noticeable and it's a bit weird that it is there, like "what is the connection?". If you want a bg with a moon, you can make a "sky look" with your bg, then combine it with the fire and cold effect to fit it with the effects that you made with your characters. Lastly, I don't know if it's just me but, I personally don't like the font you used, I think it doesn't suite the character of the two.

I hope this helps, and good luck with this wall!^^

(^o^)V
-Jane

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~LenasLover
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Topics: 75
Posts: 1235
1 year 9 months ago
As far as I can tell, it is too large. I think for that size wall there is a max of 512 kb or something of that sort. Yours is over 600. Check the FAQ for the exact amounts. Good luck. I think it is beautiful.

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~Yakushi
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Malibu Container
Topics: 19
Posts: 227
1 year 9 months ago
-hope you noticed thge size
-Sasuke's effects make him stand too much and that way he doent blend in the wall at all...
its good if you fix these.

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~sharpshot
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1 year 9 months ago
Nice effects on naruto

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~Reminisce
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1 year 9 months ago
The effects are nice - very well done on the characters and letters.
However...

They don't quite fit (and pardon me if I'm being a bit blunt).
The effects look great, at least from where I'm looking. Perhaps the "a" that Sasuke and Naruto share could be combined a bit more though (like with both cold and hot effects).
Otherwise, Naruto and Sasuke, and their names look great.
Individually.
But when you try to put them all together, it becomes a different story.

The background, I think, is the main issue here. The night sky with the moon doesn't seem to have any connection with the characters, and having the words just "float" out there makes it seem even stranger.
I think you could either change the background (screenshots with sepia tinge to create a past effect have often worked well) or dim down the effects on the characters.
Personally, I think your best bet is with the backgrounds.
Most of the walls that do get accepted may not specifically excel in one style department, but everything connects in them. They all fit, and that's the only piece lacking - relatively speaking - from your piece (no pun intended).
The effects are truly among the most stunning I've seen, but unless you can get them to fit and work together with the background, I'm afraid it probably won't go far.

I hope that helps.
Good luck!

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~LinkSoul
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Topics: 9
Posts: 33
1 year 9 months ago
Thanx guys.! I will see what i can do. Really, its hard for me to fix it. I will try and change the background a bit. I will use some new brushes i have downloaded just a few days ago. Maybe they will work!