Hlp!!! Samurai Musashi wall~Is it good enough?
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Alright kitties! I got a new wall that im pretty happy with. Took a while for me to feel like this was ready for the net in any way. I havent been on the site much so im gonna do a bit more work on my walls now that summers here and schools done. Anyway This is a Samurai Musashi wall, good game if anyones wondering, this particular wall has my first vector in it so im also proud of it being so. I believe its my best so far(especially since #2 didn't go over well) anyway, pleas tell me what you think because I spent a LOOONG time workin on this and started over (not on the vector but on everything els) a number of times.


3 years 5 months ago
Nice trendy-type wall. looks pretty good to me. i would change the bg though, it's alittle too textured and blurry. doesn't quite match the clean vector of the main image.
i'd say besides that this is pretty much ready :)
i'd say besides that this is pretty much ready :)
3 years 5 months ago
Looks pretty good to me, I like it a lot! I dont have much to say but keep it up. I like the abstract art feel to this wall! Good Job, hope lotsa people like this wall as much as I do or more!
KAIRI
KAIRI
I agree with chibicrystal, the bg is too blurred. Otherwise, it's a pretty great wall. Good luck on submitting your wall!
Its a nice wallp :D
Work on the BG... your BG is simple, boring and empty (xD i say this S*** on every comment sorry)
The bg was better on the 2nd but the scan and all the things around it was mutch better on the 1rst.. you added to much around the scan/vector on the 2nd ^^
Work on the BG... your BG is simple, boring and empty (xD i say this S*** on every comment sorry)
The bg was better on the 2nd but the scan and all the things around it was mutch better on the 1rst.. you added to much around the scan/vector on the 2nd ^^
Hmmmm i like the gears and etc of the bg
but i agree, da bg could be tweaked to stand out more
or to, you know flow with the scan, scan is very complicated
but bg is simple, see what i mean?
but i agree, da bg could be tweaked to stand out more
or to, you know flow with the scan, scan is very complicated
but bg is simple, see what i mean?
The background doesn't match the vector work with musashi and the gears up front, but the vector work has good style. Change the background to something less blurry-looking, and it'll be cool.
Heya...the stuff around Musashi is starting to look good. kinda like something i would have made in my early days..but i still hate the bg stuff...
i esp hate that color? ...its like a purplish blue... [i hate purple btw heh]..and for some reason i see that color alot around here..whats the dilly?
i would either put in a solid color bg because horizinatal stripes annoy me [ i dont own any striped shirts haha]
red+tan could easily be a good color combination to use with this, although its a lil common, but hey it works
if you had made the arrows a separate shape each, i would add a red gradient to each and change the direction of each gradient to make it more interesting
anothing thing which aint a big deal...but it bothers me that the black outlines throughout are the same px width...you could vary them in certain spots, or change the black to something more matching
i esp hate that color? ...its like a purplish blue... [i hate purple btw heh]..and for some reason i see that color alot around here..whats the dilly?
i would either put in a solid color bg because horizinatal stripes annoy me [ i dont own any striped shirts haha]
red+tan could easily be a good color combination to use with this, although its a lil common, but hey it works
if you had made the arrows a separate shape each, i would add a red gradient to each and change the direction of each gradient to make it more interesting
anothing thing which aint a big deal...but it bothers me that the black outlines throughout are the same px width...you could vary them in certain spots, or change the black to something more matching
Well the truth is that at first I wanted to do a scenery bg but I couldnt make one fit and so I tried random shapes but then that didnt work so I put it back to square 1 and added the arrows and stuff. I tried a lot of other colors to but none seemed to fit however red was my second choice so ill try it out. As for whats left in the bg I have no idea what to put there!? So ill prbably just ad some shapes and gears.
thnx 4 the advice!
thnx 4 the advice!
I dont' think it's the color. i think it's just the stripiness.
wider stripes might work? like 5 bands in the wall or something like that.
maybe you can stripe some of the tech stuff behind him.
wider stripes might work? like 5 bands in the wall or something like that.
maybe you can stripe some of the tech stuff behind him.
3 years 4 months ago
Wow! much better :) i like the color change. it almost feels a bit cluttered though. maybe move the gears at the top left back behind your character, leave everything else as is. now that whole part is opened up at the top. you can leave it like that or maybe put some text there.
MUCH better!
just somethings though.
i don't quite like how the bar smears off at the ends for those skinny ones, i think you should just continue them all the way.
it's wacky, Nice! although the file size is too big, so beware. AP might try to compress, so it's best that you save it at just a bit lower quality. under 700-800 kb should be fine.
just somethings though.
i don't quite like how the bar smears off at the ends for those skinny ones, i think you should just continue them all the way.
it's wacky, Nice! although the file size is too big, so beware. AP might try to compress, so it's best that you save it at just a bit lower quality. under 700-800 kb should be fine.
WHOA, I say its good, tho there are places where its void but other than than its good! add a title and your done! good job!
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