A Dozen Rainbows
GAH!!! I know it's a suck-arse wallpaper. I had used all my brain power on a different wallpaper and it is now fried x__x.
As you can see, this is the result of a fried brain. xD
CnC
This post has been filtered for improved legibility #348697 Quote Report Edited by ~ScarletLetter 3 years 4 months ago
I dropped the rainbow thing. It wasn't really something you'd see in a Champloo wall... Well, I can't pull it off anyway. xP
The rainbow one was an eye-sore.
Yes, I realize the edges are blurred. I'll fix it up and have version 3 in the afternoon for me. I have some hope in this wall. After fixing it up I want to sumbit it .__.
About the background, I must say that you improved well. Try to do some more contrasts between red, orange and yellow. I found it too much red. ^^'
Don't forget to sig. it.
That's all.
Sayonara
the text and the silhouette.
somehow..i'm just not diggin the border. and the black.
something with the bg though. you can see a line of intersection between the two pieces top and bottom.
do you know what i'm talking about? make sure we don't see that :D
good luck!
Burning Petals
#349313 Quote Report Edited by ~ScarletLetter 3 years 4 months ago
silhouette is too blurry.
the font is ok...but not the best. the one before was more fitting, because it was samurai champloo font
also, it'll be better if you had one word one color, and the other word nother color instead of one every letter.
1) Choose a different font to write "burning petals" in. the current one doesn't fit.
2) The red -> orange -> pink Fuu's are cute, but the red one is WAY, way too red. Tone it down a bit.
3) You might want to consider getting rid of the outer glow on the fuu's - a silhouette wall like this looks a little funny with the blurred edge of the glow.
Yeah, I changed the titile again. It did not really seem to match the wall .__.
CnC please.
#350876 Quote Report Edited by ~ScarletLetter 3 years 4 months ago
*Hopes evaporate*











