__THISRES__86808.jpg "What Exactly Is Pink? by °dalarty 3 weeks 22 hours ago")
Second Wall- rider - fate/stay night :)
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2 years 5 months ago
Ok, so the first one was not good so i didnt submit it, now, please tell me what do you think about this one :)
Pretty nice, but i think the background is a little too loud
the outline around her is trashed, also you can see white here and there
the outline around her is trashed, also you can see white here and there
I like the idea, however the scan's quality is way too low, and as ~shrinekeeper said, extraction could be done better. Personally I would suggest vectoring the scan, but I dunno if you'd want to spend so much time on this wall. And I don't mind it being flashy ^^
Hmm hey
wat i want say here that your bg looks good to me .. even thou it has lotsa effects but still good
but what i hate is this.. the scan is not that quality and it doesnt fit with the bg...and theres lotsa colors and your wallpaper and you cant see any connections between those colors >_< and and your scan you still can find a white area so that you need to clear it .. good luck ^_^
wat i want say here that your bg looks good to me .. even thou it has lotsa effects but still good
but what i hate is this.. the scan is not that quality and it doesnt fit with the bg...and theres lotsa colors and your wallpaper and you cant see any connections between those colors >_< and and your scan you still can find a white area so that you need to clear it .. good luck ^_^
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Wow, great work if you made the background, it looks awesome! Well, rider looks extremely blurry and i can see white edges, try extract it better.
Everthing else is pretty good except for the girl. she looks like she's been enlarged from a screenshot.
extraction needs work because there are unextracted parts, and outlines are jagged.
but the quality is too pixelly and blurry and the dullish colors doesnt fit the bright bg.
otherwise it's plenty interesting :D
extraction needs work because there are unextracted parts, and outlines are jagged.
but the quality is too pixelly and blurry and the dullish colors doesnt fit the bright bg.
otherwise it's plenty interesting :D
Okay, no offence.
First of all, like all the others had mentioned, find a better image and extract your rider again, or, for the last choice, vectorize it - the most sharp, hardwork and worth-for-it method.
well, I don't make abstract art a lot, so I can't anything suggestive for improving it. but if you ask me, I found it a bit loud for me.
Looking forward for your update.
First of all, like all the others had mentioned, find a better image and extract your rider again, or, for the last choice, vectorize it - the most sharp, hardwork and worth-for-it method.
well, I don't make abstract art a lot, so I can't anything suggestive for improving it. but if you ask me, I found it a bit loud for me.
Looking forward for your update.
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