I spent a long time on this one, lol. I spent about 3 days making the sky and the grass look good. What do you think? Should I submit it or does it need more work?

Thanks in advance,
Shugo000

This is fairly nice work I feel. There are an awful lot of butterflies, some of which look like they're sky bombing or something! Cut down the number of butterflies you use, and also try blurring the glow to give them a sense of motion.

The scan is clean and very well extracted, and blends in very well with the grass. I think some more shading is required the enhance the depth though, so keep trying on that.

The sun is too yellow for the blue-ness of the sky. If it's a sunset, make the rest of the sky orange and purple colours so it looks realistic.

The text needs to be more centralised I think. It just looks as though it's floating there. You also might need to make it bigger - it's slightly hard to read.

And don't forget your sig at the bottom.

Other than that (and the fact that it won't fit on my 1920x1440 desktop - try making the wallpaper bigger), it looks good. Good luck with fixing it up!

The grass' depth is nice, i think the sky should be changed, its a little too happy for Sora's look

Yes, way too many butterflies and the sky color is abit garish compared to the rest of the wp.

Here is a bigger version with less butterlies and one I darkened the picture to make it look more gloomy.
Does this look better, although I liked the brighter colors though. ^_^

It looks good to me except for the sun and the font :D



ps : (whats with people doing so many wps with grass :p)

ps: (I wish the made smilly faces :0)

Personally I like the brighter colors too...But like ns517 said its too hapy for Soras look... I love it anyway... Its good wither way. But I think that you should definatly still get rid of some butterflies... I dont exactly think they belong, wait nvm scratch that I think you should get rid of like 3 butterflies...or maybe a couple more. But otherwise I think its ready to submit. I think it'll get in!

I really, really like this, and I think it's absolutely fine the way it is, you really should submit it!! ^_^