Haruhi.
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well, to start off.
The background looks great! I really like it.
I liked the one with lyrics the most. ^^
The only real problem I see here is your choice of scan.
A happy black and white Haruhi, on the bottom left doesn't really seem to fit. :/
Try a different scan and move it a little higher and to the left.
Did you get the scan from Daisuki? Isn't this the one Kero vectored?
Oh, and maybe move the lyrics to the right a little... well, but that's just me. You decide what fits best. =)
very good very good bottom in render I like I congratulate to you.!
Yea there definitely needs to be a bit more contrast between haruhi and the night sky, particularly her bunny suit. Perhaps you could change the colour of the ears and the dress to say, a vibrant red. Also, the skin is a bit on the pale side for my liking but that's just personal preference.
Also it's a really nice background, lovely fireworks and that, but I really don't like the cross hatching effect on the moon, it looks really bad, just leave it as the normal moon.
Hope I've helped somewhat.
Also it's a really nice background, lovely fireworks and that, but I really don't like the cross hatching effect on the moon, it looks really bad, just leave it as the normal moon.
Hope I've helped somewhat.
solwyvern
well, to start off.
The background looks great! I really like it.
I liked the one with lyrics the most. ^^
The only real problem I see here is your choice of scan.
A happy black and white Haruhi, on the bottom left doesn't really seem to fit. :/
Try a different scan and move it a little higher and to the left.
Did you get the scan from Daisuki? Isn't this the one Kero vectored?
Oh, and maybe move the lyrics to the right a little... well, but that's just me. You decide what fits best. =)
Yep, thats Kero's.
Im not sure what scan to use though; I moved the text over, it looks better now.
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