Here is my first vector. And cause it's my first one I like to now what you think about it.


here is the screenshot I used.

It's a nice idea, but I think it's far too simple. There's a lack of energy in the wallpaper I feel. You need to add some effects or something I feel.

It is a good vector though. Good work!

The skin-tone lines need to be darker. They currently blend in too much with the skin that it feels as if she doesn't have a cheek and jaw. Darker tones are also needed for the shirt lines.

You might want to use dark-green floral motifs at the back. Colour-wise, I think it's okay since it goes quite pleasantly with the pastel colours.

I don't think a text is necessary since the face is too close. Text might actually become an irritation instead.

Very nice job for your first vector. it's a great skill to have, i'm still working on mine. i'd have to agree with dias, but don't go too dark.

Thanks for your comments.
Here is the new one.



Made the skin-lines and the shirt-lines darker. And like Dias suggested, I put some flowers in the background.
Are the flowers in this size okay, or need they to be smaller or bigger?

God job with the flowers, now look better ^^