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Now and then, here and there, My second wall
So here is my second wall. I made it right after viewing the anime. I tried to create the same feeling as the anime.
So I would like advises.
So I would like advises.
Oke by far not submit ready ><
nice background like the vibe coming from it but you will have to fix the floating tower since that has obviously been pasted into it, the tower stands a bit out to much from it.. and maybe add a shadow from the tower towards the watcher
The scan was fairly good extracted ore something but please dont use this blending effect cous it is like watching a ghost and there are better ways to create a ghost, i would suggest keeping it normal and then changing the colours of her to something fitting and also work the lightining effects on her then
the font is not bad it just can be done better, try to get a better curly font ( www.1001fonts.com ) and use some other colour ore blending over it to create a better desired effect
good luck and nice job so far
nice background like the vibe coming from it but you will have to fix the floating tower since that has obviously been pasted into it, the tower stands a bit out to much from it.. and maybe add a shadow from the tower towards the watcher
The scan was fairly good extracted ore something but please dont use this blending effect cous it is like watching a ghost and there are better ways to create a ghost, i would suggest keeping it normal and then changing the colours of her to something fitting and also work the lightining effects on her then
the font is not bad it just can be done better, try to get a better curly font ( www.1001fonts.com ) and use some other colour ore blending over it to create a better desired effect
good luck and nice job so far
Ok I will work on it. Thank you for the comment, be patient It will take some time to improve it.
2 years 7 months ago
Okay, I totally agree with what Beckor said; not ready to submit. First off i'll say that the font needs to be finer. The edges look very rough and need to be smoothed down. I also think this wall would look a lot better if the background image wasn't real life. A sketch or drawing instead perhaps? Finally, as beckor said, the tower looks out of place. Find some tower images that look better with the surrounding image. Keep working on your walls. Rome wasn't built in a day
It's nice but there are a few things that could have been done better. The font, is blurry and doesn't look so good. Plus it's a little on the large side.
As for the background...hmmm I'm not sure, there's just...something doesn't seem right. I'm not sure, I just think the girl and water going through, hmm not sure. Just something doesn't seem to flow as well as it could.
But that's just my opinion.
ls :)
As for the background...hmmm I'm not sure, there's just...something doesn't seem right. I'm not sure, I just think the girl and water going through, hmm not sure. Just something doesn't seem to flow as well as it could.
But that's just my opinion.
ls :)
The front and the bg just don's match,even you can't tell the front from the bg==
try change the option of the layer(not sure what's it called in English), not just put them together^^
try change the option of the layer(not sure what's it called in English), not just put them together^^
^^ well, i'm in school right now( in french class)
so i didn't dare open the link to your wallpaper but,
i think the opacity is too low that it's making her ...i don't know how to say, but i think it makes her colorings not very pleasing,,,,just to me though
the water is too real^^
C: ganbatte ne~ i'm sorry i can't open the link
so i didn't dare open the link to your wallpaper but,
i think the opacity is too low that it's making her ...i don't know how to say, but i think it makes her colorings not very pleasing,,,,just to me though
the water is too real^^
C: ganbatte ne~ i'm sorry i can't open the link
I tried to make everything's you said, but finally the scan isn't good quality and I don't know how to improve the floating tower
I think you can vector this. it's not too difficult i don't think (b/c it's really too blurry)
as for the tower, i think putting clouds around it will solve the problem, to make it seem like it's supposed to be in the sky , and not just you''re -just-putting-it-there, sort of? ^^
the bg is too real, i really think creating your own is better, because it's blurry and .... too real, yeah i know i've said that like twice but..it is.
C: good luck on it
as for the tower, i think putting clouds around it will solve the problem, to make it seem like it's supposed to be in the sky , and not just you''re -just-putting-it-there, sort of? ^^
the bg is too real, i really think creating your own is better, because it's blurry and .... too real, yeah i know i've said that like twice but..it is.
C: good luck on it
Well blueangel got nice idea as usual (how are you by the way miss?) vectoring this will be piece o' cake, and i think you can give it a fresh loog with vectors... if you need advices, let me know, or if you want i can even vector it for u, to help a french fellow ;)
another thing you should work on is definitely your font for title. as i always say, title of a wall is a VERY important part to design and can completely change a wall. i suggest you to upload fonts HERE on dafont.com they got really nice fonts and large variety.
good luck and let me knwo for vector
another thing you should work on is definitely your font for title. as i always say, title of a wall is a VERY important part to design and can completely change a wall. i suggest you to upload fonts HERE on dafont.com they got really nice fonts and large variety.
good luck and let me knwo for vector
EVENTUALLY... THE SAME XD
Well, here comes another try. It took me a long time because I can only work on it during weekends.
So I vectorized it. It's my first vector so if something is wrong with it say it.
I didn't greatly modified the tower because I really don't know how to make the cloud effect yet, I will work on it this evening.
Well , nice job
(i'm so sad that everyone's gotten ahead of me to vector ;(
but what i actually meant' is vector the bg^^
like yeah
but your new vector sorta matches the lighting now,...
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(i'm so sad that everyone's gotten ahead of me to vector ;(
but what i actually meant' is vector the bg^^
like yeah
but your new vector sorta matches the lighting now,...
C:
2 years 7 months ago
It looks liek everythingwas jsut oapster on top on each other and the opacity was mucked arounf with
Well no much change on this one, I tried to do something with the background and add some cloud on the tower but I think I will replace it by on another thing because the quality of it is too weak.
The shadows are off. The scan needs to be darker because the shadow is behind her. Also the shadow from that chess looking thing has to be over to the left 15 degrees. Also that thing looks too bright right now, darken it to almost black but leave the sides as they are so as to show that the light is realy behind it. good luck
