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~New Wallpaper~ Need critique/suggestions.
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The quality of the image requires attention as elements appear either too blurred or too sharpened (in the case of pixelisation). The textual elements also lack clarity and in terms of compositional placement need to be rethought entirely.
The quality of the image requires attention as elements appear either too blurred or too sharpened (in the case of pixelisation). The textual elements also lack clarity and in terms of compositional placement need to be rethought entirely.
Hi, I actually like the concept of your wallpaper.
However, for now, to make it looks better, these are my suggestions:
1. Concept. Put the male and female faces on the back, while the scan where they're hugging in the front. Note: make the faces less seen by reducing the opacity.
2. Male and Female faces on the back. I think you should try to find a nice scan with the same pose so you can make a great wallpaper. Try making them less blurry, especially some parts which you can see is extremely blurred or sharpened, which maybe because you resized them from a small screen shots into as big as wallpaper. Are those screen shots? if they are, not good, because you need to paint or vector them.
3. Text. I do think the color of the text need to be changed. Because you can see, nothing on the wallpaper is pink beside the text (well that usually not a problem, but I think it is this time). So you may want to change it to other color. And what I usually do, I choose random color and experimenting with the blending mode in photoshop until I think they look nice.
Oh, and trying new font will be really nice. Try take a look at Dafont for some nice fonts.
I think it will be better if you actually put it on the center, but that is only to me though, because your tida here usually has weird tastes, LOL.
4. Others. For some romantic feelings you want to have (yes? or no?) you can make those by adding some blurred round shapes with different sizes on the front. That will be really nice. ;D
I think that's it for now. Maybe I can give more thorough critiques later.
May I know what program do you use? if you use photoshop, maybe I can help you explaining to you step by step to achieve some effects to make the wallpaper looks better.
I'm sorry if I'm not really clear with my comment above, but if you have some parts that you don't understand, or want some helps, feel free to ask. ;D
I hope my comment can help you a bit.
-tida
However, for now, to make it looks better, these are my suggestions:
1. Concept. Put the male and female faces on the back, while the scan where they're hugging in the front. Note: make the faces less seen by reducing the opacity.
2. Male and Female faces on the back. I think you should try to find a nice scan with the same pose so you can make a great wallpaper. Try making them less blurry, especially some parts which you can see is extremely blurred or sharpened, which maybe because you resized them from a small screen shots into as big as wallpaper. Are those screen shots? if they are, not good, because you need to paint or vector them.
3. Text. I do think the color of the text need to be changed. Because you can see, nothing on the wallpaper is pink beside the text (well that usually not a problem, but I think it is this time). So you may want to change it to other color. And what I usually do, I choose random color and experimenting with the blending mode in photoshop until I think they look nice.
Oh, and trying new font will be really nice. Try take a look at Dafont for some nice fonts.
I think it will be better if you actually put it on the center, but that is only to me though, because your tida here usually has weird tastes, LOL.
4. Others. For some romantic feelings you want to have (yes? or no?) you can make those by adding some blurred round shapes with different sizes on the front. That will be really nice. ;D
I think that's it for now. Maybe I can give more thorough critiques later.
May I know what program do you use? if you use photoshop, maybe I can help you explaining to you step by step to achieve some effects to make the wallpaper looks better.
I'm sorry if I'm not really clear with my comment above, but if you have some parts that you don't understand, or want some helps, feel free to ask. ;D
I hope my comment can help you a bit.
-tida
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I hope the pixelisation is intended. Although I didn't find it very appealing >_>.
tidaHi, I actually like the concept of your wallpaper.
However, for now, to make it looks better, these are my suggestions:
1. Concept. Put the male and female faces on the back, while the scan where they're hugging in the front. Note: make the faces less seen by reducing the opacity.
2. Male and Female faces on the back. I think you should try to find a nice scan with the same pose so you can make a great wallpaper. Try making them less blurry, especially some parts which you can see is extremely blurred or sharpened, which maybe because you resized them from a small screen shots into as big as wallpaper. Are those screen shots? if they are, not good, because you need to paint or vector them.
3. Text. I do think the color of the text need to be changed. Because you can see, nothing on the wallpaper is pink beside the text (well that usually not a problem, but I think it is this time). So you may want to change it to other color. And what I usually do, I choose random color and experimenting with the blending mode in photoshop until I think they look nice.
Oh, and trying new font will be really nice. Try take a look at Dafont for some nice fonts.
I think it will be better if you actually put it on the center, but that is only to me though, because your tida here usually has weird tastes, LOL.
4. Others. For some romantic feelings you want to have (yes? or no?) you can make those by adding some blurred round shapes with different sizes on the front. That will be really nice. ;D
I think that's it for now. Maybe I can give more thorough critiques later.
May I know what program do you use? if you use photoshop, maybe I can help you explaining to you step by step to achieve some effects to make the wallpaper looks better.
I'm sorry if I'm not really clear with my comment above, but if you have some parts that you don't understand, or want some helps, feel free to ask. ;D
I hope my comment can help you a bit.
Well i must agree with tida. maybe fix the quality a bit and thats it ^^
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