Congratulations on getting your first wallpaper approved into the gallery!

This is a nice wall, however there are a couple of things worth pointing out.
Firstly, the scan seems to be a bit blurry compared to the rest of the wall.
Secondly, the "burst angel" text seems a bit off-balance compared to the rest of the yellow strip.
Thirdly, a few people around AP don't like ecchi walls that much. (Trust me, i learned that myself.)
And lastly, 1024x768 walls don't appeal to me much. Mainly becoz i like big walls (and i use widescreen. :P )

However, the overall wall doesn't look too bad, and even though some of the brushes have no relation to the theme of this wall (like the butterflies), i think you have used them quite well and the composition is pretty good. I like the overall "fire" theme too, it fits the character well.
Don't take much notice about my small resolution whinge... im just a fan for large wallpapers. lol.

Overall nice work and i look forward to more walls in the future.

Love it
the background and the orange combine with bakuretsu
nice job