It looks alright. The snow concept seems to work well… Still…

Ed’s automail could use more work. As right now, his automail looks like it’s made of plastic instead of metal. And I’m not saying to make shiny and reflective, ‘cause that isn’t the case here. Give it a rustier and more beat down look from what you have now. Give it more definition (look for references if needed). Also, the thumb and some of the joints between fingers look quite distorted.

I like how the main image uses DOF to create a nice sense of depth between Ed’s face and his automail. I wish you had kept that also present here. That’s one of the things I like the most about this particularly shot. It might just seem like a trivial thing, but it isn’t…

Also, one last thing, I see a lot of snow, but not a single drop on the character. I would have expected at least to see some snow on his cold metal hand…