I like the colors. deep colors i like alot ^^. you did good on this wall.

Fog color with two major motoko are making me look good to see. nice!

I like the colors in the background but I think you've put quite a number of pictures in it, more than it actually needs in fact. Motoko's figure (in the background, not the scan picture) is barely visible thus making her 'useless' in the whole image. In fact I think that most of the left side of the wallpaper is quite 'full'. I guess you probably finished the left side (which is nice by the way. I like both Motoko and those purple lights along with that small building above her head) and then looked at the left side and concluded that it was way too empty. So you got a bit hasty with it and this is the result. If what I say is true then a bit of advice would be to do your works more patiently. Postpone them when you get either bored or tired with them and try again a different day. If what I say is untrue then forgive and forget what I just said^^;;. Anyway I like it and since it is your first I'm sure the other ones would be even better.

that pretty wallpaper, I'm much attention by the impact and position, and indeed this pretty good ... I liked the rendering much of Makoto and even though I have not seen the series of shell in Gosht, I like the pretty wallpaper ... The position is quite acceptable, this bright highlights and flashes or sparks that accompanies it are great, situated at the place where render this perfect, nuves at the bottom and sides of the side is another excellent detail and best of that everything is perfectly combines with the model being used to make the wallpaper, the fog combined with glare and the black background makes the work look even more attractive for what this, great job man, the style of this wonderful wallpaper, greetings