Nice, changing the girl's hair color was definitely a good move- she goes with the scene real well. The clouds look great, and the golden sparkles are also a nice addition. Keep up the good work!

oh, and Ugetsu Hakua is an artist- the scan you used in particular isn't dedicated to any anime (at least, I don't think it is) It's okay though, I said something very similar to what you did in one of my first submissions to AP 4 years ago, haha.

I love what you did with that scan...it looked totally unattractive to me...now it looks a whole lot different...I like the purplish sky&clouds...maybe some more details,like a distant tree and petals would look nice here,as well.but good work,none the less :D
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