Hrm...the tears and blood/tat bother me.

water doesn't stream unless under extreme gravity. just look at waterfalls, they are straight but kinda dot off cause water is polar (i think lol) and the molecules do some weird dance. waterfall tears are only in anime lol and RM style is too realistic to pull off the straight line you have.

it needs to be more streamy. to find out pour some water on your hand or face and watch it...

i use the color burn tech too, but first i draw out the blood dribble with the lasso tool. the lasso tool is your pal. but great general shape. try goo-tutorials and type in blood, there are great ones out there.

also, the red and black things don't fit for me...maybe put her under her lovers bed lol? cutting and stalking, i think that counts for infatuation.

Have a nice day!

Everyone already told you what you need to improve on. Anyway, this is a really nice interpretation of the theme. Just please improve what people have told you to work on, because the concept you have is good.

Oh, you forgot your sig. >.>

I know I already commented... but since you changed the disc, I guess I'm going to comment again. ^^;; As once said, I love the wall... it has an excellent theme, and what you've done with it is great... but if that's blood... blood doesn't flow uniformly, especially if it's in different rivuletts. O_o;; make it seem more random where the blood is, and possibly have a droplett or two falling to the ground. More red would be coolies, but isn't necessary. ^_^ Good job!