Hmm... really terrific job on vectoring the scan and adding your own style to it. I like the background elements a lot, as usual, but there needs to be more of it. I'm guessing you're trying to convey space but it just looks too empty. That line of birds on the bottom look really odd... too uniform of a line, and the smudged clouds look too much like dirty blotches =/ The feather behind the text also feels out of place. The lighting and texture is pretty good, I think you just need to work a little more on some of the details in this wall *^-^*

Mwah, i would have put her on the other side.

the disjointed lines bug me a bit, in the vector that is.

very pretty colors, very asuka.

maybe i would have added more feathers, just cause one is kinda awkward (it is a very pretty feather tho)

Have a nice day!