As an animation, Bakemonogatari has a simple, clean art style. But the guest illustrations for the series are anything but simple! So, it's great to see that °Tens took on a more complex illustration and made it his own with vector gradients so fine at points it more resembles painting that vectoring. Do have a look at this beautiful wallpaper!
It's not bad, but the character looks too soft compared to the trees and stuff in the background. I think you need to go back and do some blurring and softening, right now there's just too much difference between the two. Overall your trees look pretty good though, it just needs a bit more effort.
Not bad, although kind of typical.
the leaves on the trees aren't bad, but the trunks of the trees look awful. i would work on giving them a more trr like texture.
and red's right. the rest of the background needs some softening like the character.
but my biggest gripe is the use of the grass brush. i'd give you major props had you made ou OWN grass brush (which takes all of 3 seconds. believe me, i know. i do it all the time) and had you used your own grass brush to make the grass.
but not too bad overall. just needs some work in a few areas.
Red is my fav color the way you have that cherry red color for her hair and outfit is just great the tree is very nice to the green is so vibrent. I would say there is even a little fan service goin on here. I'm not a fan service type of girl but a total fav. An oldie but a goddie.
This scan are good, the girl its perfect, the background make the girl seem some provocative...good job Susan-chan...regards from Monterrey México, be care...
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the leaves on the trees aren't bad, but the trunks of the trees look awful. i would work on giving them a more trr like texture.
and red's right. the rest of the background needs some softening like the character.
but my biggest gripe is the use of the grass brush. i'd give you major props had you made ou OWN grass brush (which takes all of 3 seconds. believe me, i know. i do it all the time) and had you used your own grass brush to make the grass.
but not too bad overall. just needs some work in a few areas.
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-- Vince.
i like the character and the great job on the background: the grass and the three!
Congratulations!